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Anenemus

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Chapter 20:Unexpected Encounters
Valior ran across the streets of Varrock. His face looked terrible with great scars. He was wearing Verac's Armour as usual with a Dragon Dagger. When he came close to the Varrock Square, he noticed two strange hooded figures. One was tall while the other one was slightly shorter. They were wearing black robes with black coifs. Valior came to a halt. As the two figures came closer, one of the figures drew his hood back, revealing a boy.
Valior was sure he had seen this boy before, who looked no older than 16. With brown hair and baby blue eyes, Valior recognised Zen.
"Zen! Its a relief to see you!"said Valior. "Who are you with?"
The other robed figure took of his hood. Blonde hair and blue eyes. Nate. Valior's eyes narrowed.
"Well well. Teaching Zen how to be a scoundrel are we?"spat Valior.
Nate's face flushed red."Go back to your little Temple Knights."
Zen came in between. "Hey, lets cut the insults. Why you here Valior?Where are Hexa and Elisa?"
Valior walked towards a dark alley in Varrock and beckoned both of them to come closer. They did, albeit Nate did so hesitantly.
Valior looked down and fiddled with his dagger. He started to speak. "We raided Zemouregal's Fort recently. Zemouregal is an evil being of great power and he is the killer of Arrav. Somehow, he knew of our coming, and we got ourselves injured badly and we all teleported away. After that, we got sperated when we were trekking through the Khardian Desert. We ran into Enakhra the Mahjarrat and we teleproted the hell away after she summoned a small army of zombies."
Zen's heart began to race. Is this what Enakhra is trying to do?Kill anyone involved with him?Before Zen's thoughts were interrupted by Nate.
"Where did you see Enakhra?Me and Zen are actually planning to kill her."said Nate.
"Well...perhaps around the ruins of Uzer."said Valior hesistantly.
"Thanks!"smiled Zen.
"No prob. What have you TWO been doing?"

04-Sep-2011 18:47:56 - Last edited on 05-Sep-2011 12:57:54 by Anenemus

Kristia

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Hmm. I must have missed that bit, I presumed the story continued after Azigarath's review.
The story seems to be going a little... mad. It's like you're reinventing Runescape's history. And I thought Zen had blue eyes?
You also repeated the word "unconscious" 3 times in consecutive sentences, it would probably read better if you sort of linked them together and found a different word :P

04-Sep-2011 20:53:51 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2011 07:55:22 by Kristia

Anenemus

Anenemus

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Nate explained about everything from the Wizard's Tower incident to the incident in Enakhra's Base. When Nate finished speaking, he looked up at Valior to see his face in agony.
"So..the stories and rumours were true..Zamorak has been ressurected."muttered Valior.
No one spoke for a while.
"THIS IS TERRIBLE! HOW ON EARTH DO YOU EXPECT TO KILL ENAKHRA THEN?"yelled Valior, causing a few people outside the alley to look at the trio nervously.
"There is always Akthankos. But of course....he has been missing for many eons."muttered Zen.
Both Nate and Valior looked at Zen.
"You know about Akthanakos?"gasped Valior.
"Yeah, my father told me about him when I was a kid. He told me bedtime stories about Akthanakos. A being who had the head of a Camel and fought an epic battle with a female called Enakhra. However, Enakhra won and Akthanakos became her minion."explained Zen.
"That story is true. I suggest you two search the library of Varrock Palace. I have to get going."said Valior. Without another word, Valior throw a teleport tablet and disappeared.
"Lets search the library."suggested Nate. "We can tell about our problem to King Roald too on the way and explain why you can't attend the contest."
The two of them went north to Varrock Palace. Nate stopped walking at the courtyard where guards were being slaughtered.
"Zen, lets split up to save more time. Explain to the King, ill go to the library. Go straight and go to the room to the right.."said Nate."After gathering some information we'll prepare ourselves."
"'Kay."
Zen ran straight. He reached a corridor. He went right and went into the room, exactly where Nate told him it was. It was a medium-sized room, with two thrones and 5 other chairs placed against the walls. There was a table in the middle of the room and a door on the other side of the room. The room opened and in stepped King Roald.
"Ah, Zen. What brings you here?"asked King Roald. He looked very pale.

05-Sep-2011 13:25:05 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2011 09:36:10 by Anenemus

Carsten 901

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Awsome chapter :D and also if you dont know who i am i am Carsten 901, lightrider, and lighthero d. Also i thought out a pretty cool bil so here it is
Name: Light

Age: 21

Armour: He wears a chestplate that looks like a form of a bandos plate but it is white and his chest plate is about like torag's but is white aswell. He wields a huge claymore that was infused with power and makes it seem to the wielder that it a light as a feather making it devistating with both speed and power.
Follower Of God: He hardly likes any of them but he perfers saradomin.
Physical description: He is majorly ripped and looks like he used stariods but he didn't. He is around 6.2 and has hestarical strength. He has Blond hair and weird white eyes (like his intire eye is white)
Attitude: He is extreamly nice but is willing to kill anything as long as he has a reason. He is mercyless and cant be stopped when he is enraged. He strives under presure.

06-Sep-2011 04:27:36

Kristia

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^ His chest is both white bandos chestplate and white torag chestplate? How does that make any sense? It's like wearing a jumper over a coat... lol. I presume the torag bit is meant to be legs.
Oh, and I somehow doubt that there are claymores in RS.

06-Sep-2011 07:58:04 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2011 07:58:51 by Kristia

Anenemus

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Thanks for the bio.
If you don't mind Carsten, can I turn your Claymore into a Saradomin Sword?I think it would be more...fitting.
^Firelord meant that his bio wears a white bandos chesplate with a torso similar to the torso of a Torag platebody.
Also, there are no claymores on Runescape.
Hes does have blue eyes. Baby blue eyes.

06-Sep-2011 08:52:27 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2011 08:55:20 by Anenemus

Anenemus

Anenemus

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"I would like to leave the Contest."said Zen, waiting for the King to exclaim with suprise or get furious.
"Aaah. Is this something important?"asked Roald with a ghost of a smile.
"Yes."
Roald looked grim. "So be it. I am indebted to you for saving my child."
"Erm..are you alright your majesty?"asked Zen, for he noticed that the king looked very pale.
"Yes, just some flu. Well, i'll see you later, I have some work to attend to."replied Roald with a small smile. He then went past Zen, through the door Zen came from. Zen followed Roald outside to see that Roald had disappeared. Confused, Zen came back to the courtyard to see Nate waiting for him with a book.
"How the blazes did you..?"
Nate smiled broadly. "Assassins are meant to fast, my friend. Unlike the bulky warriors, going around with huge battleaxes and hammers! Anyways, I just asked for a book from the librarian Reldo about the Mahjarrat."
"Did you read it?"
"Yep. You can read it now. Just go to the corner of the courtyard."said Nate.
Zen took the book out of Nate's hands and sat on a barrel at the south-western corner of the courtyard. The book had a vivid blue cover. It had the title "Stern Judges" written on it. Zen opened the book and looked for pages regarding Akthanakos.
On the thirtieth page of the book, Zen found a page mentioning Akthanakos. Whoever wrote the information must have been quite an adventurer, or must have had good correspondence with adventurers. Zen read about the location of Akthanakos. Apparently, Akthanakos was last seen near the town of Nardah.
Zen walked towards Nate and gave the book back.
"Well?"asked Nate
"Nardah."muttered Zen.
"Yes, lets prepare."said Nate as he clapped his hands together.

06-Sep-2011 10:22:22 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2011 10:30:00 by Anenemus

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