Finished reading, it's so much easier to do so when I don't have to review.
There were typos and comma splices here and there but oh well.
Also, I'd like to point out, yet again, that you sometimes describe things that I already know. For example, I already know that poisoned daggers are useful for hurting people, you know.
I like how you are 'rewriting RuneScape history,' more people should do that; it's a basis for learning new concepts and ideas, and it will get you to expand in new directions too.
So, why does the skeleton-lady (azazazazazazazaza or what's-her-face) have to say 'blood barrage' to cast it? If she said it in French, Polish or Danish, would the spell be cast anyway?
But np, I'm just lost in my little world. Good typing.
21-Nov-2011 00:46:30