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Anenemus

Anenemus

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Chapter 21: Jaldroach*'s Secret
Deep in the Kharidian Desert, was a small hill. This hill however, was no ordinary hill, it was quite peculiar indeed with 8 mirrors pointing towards the middle of the hill. Two men were standing on it too. One could be distinguished as a person from the Desert, due to his white desert dressing and a white coif. He also had tan skin and brown hair. He carried a Steel Scimitar at his waist, indicating that he was a Bandit.
The other man however, was quite different. Like the Bandit, he too was covered in white, except it was white armour. He had white platelegs which was obtained from the tombs of dead heroes in the land of Morytania. He wore a spikey chestplate. On the left shoulder of the chestplate was a large spikey chunk of armour, which looked quite intimidating. The arms of the man were almost bare except he wore spikey vambraces made of the same material as the chestplate.
The man was quite muscular too. He had blonde hair, which made him an outsider from the Kharidian Desert. He had white eyes with a dead look. He was carrying a Silver Two Handed Blade with a Star as it's hilt. It was the rare Saradomin Sword.
"Effendi Light, the Jaldroacht Pyramid is located south of here. Its not far, just a small walk."said the bandit. Although he looked rough, his voice sounded like rain drops dripping from a leaf.
"That's fine. Thanks alot for your help, Eblis."said the adventurer called Light.
Eblis nodded and walked north. A few steps after walking, he turned back and called out to Light.
"Oh, you might want to keep your Sword somewhere else, Effendi."
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After a few hours, Light had gone through the Pyramid. Filled with the damned. Mummies everywhere along with swarms of deadly bugs called Scarabites were crawling everywhere along with frustrating traps.
"DAMN THIS! FINNALLY..I HAVE REACHED THE ALTAR ROOM!"yelled Light. He was knocked out and magically appeared out of the pyramid many times.

09-Sep-2011 09:20:29 - Last edited on 20-Sep-2011 13:13:27 by Anenemus

Kristia

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Hmm. Spiky, spiky, spkiy... yknow, it often helps to grab a thesaurus and look for other words. I know I often get stuck in my story trying to think of alternate adjectives, since repeated words do tend to bore the reader.
I do like the bit at the end of what you've written about the "dead look". That's a great way of describing somebody, as it says quite a bit about their personality :)

09-Sep-2011 18:51:34 - Last edited on 09-Sep-2011 18:52:42 by Kristia

Anenemus

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Light kept his Saradomin Sword behind him inside it's cover. Light stepped forward and touched the altar. Immediately, he felt a tingling sensation in his mind. He had strange visions of ice, smoke and shadows. Instantly, his head began to hurt, as if it was splitting. As he turned around with his hand clutching his head, he saw some movement from the corner of his eye. He turned back to see a strange entity floating on the altar.
This entity was unlike any other entity Light had ever seen. The entity looked far more bizzare than any Zombie or Revenant from the Wilderness. It had the head of a jackal with a human mouth. While the jackal part of the head was like the colour of bronze while the lower part of the head did not have any skin at all. The entity's eyes seemed like red burning flames in their sockets.
The neck and shoulder blades of the entity seemed to be made out of the same jackal-hide while the rest of the body was covered in tan skin. The entity seemed to be wearing red platelegs.
"Foul creature!I have come here to slay you!"shouted Light who's mind was still sharp despite the pain.
The entity laughed. It's voice was otherworldly and had a strange tone like that of waves smashing against a tall cliff.
"Foolish mortal. Yet you are another one of those Zamorakian or Saradominsist dogs. Also, I am called Azzanadra by my kin. Do not refer to such petty words in front of me again."said Azzanadra with a sigh.
Light sprang forward. Although his armour seemed heavy, he was suprisisngly agile. He lifted his Sword of Saradomin upwards, causing blue lightning to come and strike Azzanadra. However, the lightning which normally injured creatures greatly, just seemed to go trough Azzanadra and hit the floor.
"Thank you for the diamonds. Now to repay you.."said Azzanadra with a sinister tone of malice. He floated forward into Light's torso and disappeared. The last thing Light felt was the pain in his head increasing. Light collapsed, unable to bear the pain.

13-Sep-2011 18:04:41 - Last edited on 20-Sep-2011 13:10:45 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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Chapter 22:Blood Spilt
Enddragon ran through the dark mountainside path. Although he was wearing rune armour, the Guthix-green trim of his platebody was gleaming in the dark. Although he seemed to be no older than 25 years, he had snow-white hair. He held his Rune Kiteshield at his back and his Rune Scimitar in his bagpack as he ran.
After a few hours of running, End finally reached the end of his journey; the Paterdomus Temple. It was not hard to miss seeing as it was the only building in the nearby vincity.
Paterdomus was built on the border the dark land of Morytania and Misthalin, right next to the holy river Salve, which was blessed by Saradomin himself. The Paterdomus has helped the Salve to stay blessed to prevent the dark inhabitants of Morytania. Next to the temple was a small graveyard which seemed centuries old.
"Im suprised how this small temple has managed to keep an entire land of foul creatures away from Misthalin."laughed End.
He walked forwards towards the doors of Paterdomus and knocked. No one answered. He knocked again, albeit with more loudness. A raspy voice answered behind the door.
"What do you want?"
"King Roald has sent me to check the tidings of a monk called Dazzle. No wait, I meant Drezel."said End.
"Oh!Erm...alright come in. No wai-AAAARGGHH!"screamed the raspy voice. End pushed the door open to reveal a ghastly sight.
There were the bodies of Zamorakian monks scattered around the floor. There was blood splattered on all their bodies. What was suprising was that Paterdomus was a Saradominist temple and had Zamorakians in it. End quickly ran up a flight of stairs. He checked both the first and second floor and saw that there had been Zamorakian monks. Finally, End reached the third floor.
It was dark and the floor was made out of stone unlike the previous floors which had tiles. There was a coffin in the middle of the room and a cell on the other side. Inside the cell was a bald monk in Saradomnist Robes.

20-Sep-2011 13:34:33 - Last edited on 20-Sep-2011 15:03:30 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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"Help free me! Try breaking the lock of the door!"mouthed the monk.
End crept foward and with one quick swing of his scimitar, he smashed the lock. The broken lock fell on to the floor and the monk rushed out.
"You must be Enddragon sent by King Roald. Tell him that the River Salve is working fine. The monks of the devil, those Zamorakians were attempting to contaminate the river. However they got killed when a creature came into Paterdomus. It came from Morytania when the Salve lost its power temporarily."said Drezel. "We have to get out of here while we can, its still here."
The two of them rushed down to the ground floor. As they were about to exit, one of the windows broke with a crash and a pale creature lept it. It seemed to be humanoid in shape and had brown rags for clothes. It was moonlight-white and had red, glaring eyes. It had stale, yellow teeth which seemed unaturally sharp. It did not have any hair.
It quickly leaped onto Drezel, knocking him towards the floor. Just at the creature attempted to take a chunk of Drezel's arm, End kicked the creature by the groin. The creature staggered backwards, stunned. End kicked it again and it collapsed on the floor. End attempted to severe the creature's leg but it quickly sprang up. Luckily, the scimitar caught the creature's neck and sliced it with gore. The creature's white, egg-like head went upwards and landed back on the floor. A fountain of blood spurted out of the creature's neck.Drezel stood up, shaking his head and laughed.
"Thanks a lot, End. Although it was just a ghoul luckily and not some sly vampyre. Shame about the floor though."said Drezel, indicating towards the creature's blood. "Let me give you some sacred bones which you can use to increase your connection to Saradomin."
Drezel took out a few, small, fragile-looking bones and handed it to End who pocketed it. Just as End opened the doors, Drezel called him.
"Oh, please throw this creature's body into the River?"

20-Sep-2011 15:13:32 - Last edited on 21-Sep-2011 16:26:31 by Anenemus

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