Guardian Fox
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Good story; and I agree with some of the stuff that went on in it. I also laughed a good amount :3
Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've considered adding a section to the trial reflecting Yelps' more recent crimes (causing the near-extinction of the Golden Chinchompa, among other things), but this story might end up becoming just a bit redundant in the near future (at least as far as Yelps is concerned) so I'm not sure it's worth the effort.
But basically my goal was to make a few points, in a manner that I hoped would also be entertaining. I pretty much knew that as far as points about the SOF went, I was more or less preaching to the choir. So I decided to have some fun with it, working in Ozan and Ariane, the goblin generals, and a few other favorites. The trial portions were especially fun to write from beginning to end.
As for Yelps' Villainous Breakdown, I imagine him saying that in the same high-pitched voice as his infamous 'Extra spins for the win', only turned up higher as he gets crazier. It sounds downright terrifying in my head.
Oh, and the 'Tom Dooley' parody was something I originally wrote for another darkly comedic thread, but I wasn't satisfied with my original lyrics so I changed some and added a few.
As for the latter portion, the souvenir vendor bits are my personal favorite part. As I said before, I'd love to have a T-shirt like the one described.
Good story; and I agree with some of the stuff that went on in it. I also laughed a good amount :3
Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've considered adding a section to the trial reflecting Yelps' more recent crimes (causing the near-extinction of the Golden Chinchompa, among other things), but this story might end up becoming just a bit redundant in the near future (at least as far as Yelps is concerned) so I'm not sure it's worth the effort.
But basically my goal was to make a few points, in a manner that I hoped would also be entertaining. I pretty much knew that as far as points about the SOF went, I was more or less preaching to the choir. So I decided to have some fun with it, working in Ozan and Ariane, the goblin generals, and a few other favorites. The trial portions were especially fun to write from beginning to end.
As for Yelps' Villainous Breakdown, I imagine him saying that in the same high-pitched voice as his infamous 'Extra spins for the win', only turned up higher as he gets crazier. It sounds downright terrifying in my head.
Oh, and the 'Tom Dooley' parody was something I originally wrote for another darkly comedic thread, but I wasn't satisfied with my original lyrics so I changed some and added a few.
As for the latter portion, the souvenir vendor bits are my personal favorite part. As I said before, I'd love to have a T-shirt like the one described.
04-Mar-2014 18:08:32 - Last edited on 04-Mar-2014 18:14:38 by Darelzel
