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Not so, Cyun. I think I got more than half of it. I was just about to post the following when you put up your explanation (above).
The first part of your poem I could only see as the Arab world, particularly the…
“Gazing east, and down,
Upon the odd fellows
With their concealed
Heads, hidden dictators
And peculiar religion”
…as in praying toward Mecca.
And then the second certainly does evoke the Twin Towers imagery with:
“Against the gleaming
Glassy twin of good
Where white people
Strut in leveled floors”
This is beautiful AND inspired (pun intended), especially the “leveled floors”… as in multi-story.
After two clear images in black and white, you brilliantly throw all into a gray cloud of question by comparing Capitalism and Islam; calling everything into question… Terrorists? Freedom Fighters? Forcing us to examine our own Ivory Towers… from which we view the world, judge others, and ultimately wall ourselves off from understanding and compassion.
Well done, Cyun.

08-Oct-2012 02:35:35

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New Sesame Street Theme Lyrics
By Cigam_mai - October 8, 2012
Romney’s way…
Taking our funds away;
Asking Bert and Ernie to compete.
Can you tell me how to fund?
How to fund our Sesame Street?
No air play…
PBS closed today;
Public TV taking all the heat.
Can you tell me how to fund?
How to fund our Sesame Street?
Romney’s way…
Taking our funds away;
Asking Bert and Ernie to compete.
Can you tell me how to fund?
How to fund our Sesame Street?
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Presidential debate topics sure do make for interesting political fodder. Romney got tagged as *anting to kill Big Bird! Hahahaha! It lodged in my brain, and as so often happens, comes back out as a poem (in this case lyrics; same thing, just set to music). If you don’t know the tune, crawl out from under that rock, and listen to it on YouTube.
My conservative friends will only laughingly brand me a traitor, while my liberal friends will probably carry me around on their shoulders, being convinced I have finally “seen the global warming light.” To everybody else, I’ll just be the author of a humorous jab at politics. Enjoy.

11-Oct-2012 09:36:17

Cyun

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~ Narcissus Woolf ~

Rhapsodic rapture up the garden path,
scratching pine needles peeling pinky skin, plump and passionate
from high cheek bones, wavy golden locks, and still lochs
in the distance, frozen clammy mirror, rippling resonance of the
echoing tree-line, with a fat red moon sliding in the shadowed canopy
warped in the murky depths of pond life, I see myself.
reeds twinkling with dewy wet baubles, trickling onto my knees caked in mud
like a classical painting, watercolour, I see my eyes, my nose,
and my mouth, curved strawberry in a creamy visage, how wonderful,
look at my words,
look at the letters littered on my little flushed tongue,
tiptoeing, trembling in the cold of the dusk. My nose dips in,
I feel lapping of liquid glass, and I shiver
I describe the smell of air and some leaks in my nasal cave,
as if high tide high time now, I fixate and I gather weight,
tipping flowerbed stones into my overcoat pocket, I've always been waif.
I plunge my mouth in, I gargle libretti,
bones whacking the sides of my deadened flesh,
my lungs agape, ready…
I let it in,
the water words whorls inwards; I consume the language of the mirror,
the ersatz eradication of my mind, I fall into utterances of vanity, and into a void of verses.

12-Oct-2012 15:46:52 - Last edited on 12-Oct-2012 15:47:20 by Cyun

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My response to a Clan Member asking if all we did on the thread was Bump:
No, WR, it’s not ALL we do...
Well, not only the thread
But there’s one on your head.
And please don’t explode,
But there’s one in the road.
You were kicked out of line,
And hip-checked that time.
So, please don’t just dump
in some generalized lump
The tagging we all call... a bump!
Feel free to be as creative as your Muse allows.

17-Oct-2012 10:10:10

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A talented and creative young man, the adult son of a couple I greatly admire, posted the following on Facebook:
“Vote **** scromney. Dirty special underwear FOREVER!”
There was more, along with other inappropriate and rude comments by others. The following poem sprang from my sense of outrage at how casually hateful and polarized much of the political spewing has become. I say “spewing,” because it is NOT discussion, NOR discourse* it is something straight out of a sewer. There are those that point to our history and would have me believe that political mudslinging is a time-honored tradition in this country, and that I shouldn’t be shocked. I’m not shocked, I’m outraged and saddened. I keep praying that whoever gets elected will govern with honesty and integrity, lead with humbleness and humility, and serve the American people rather than their own political interests.
What gives you the right?
by Cigam_mai - Oct. 27, 2012
You really have no right
To so profane his name.
It’s vulgar and it’s course
And brings your family shame.
I’m sure you’ll rail and rant
Claim freedom as your right,
But ugly thoughts and words
Are just a trashy blight.
No talent you display
When rudely you defame
You’re no creative light
When you post something lame.
Not clever, not witty
The mistake of the young.
As you betray yourself,
You are hung by your tongue.

27-Oct-2012 11:24:47

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I got a Ghoul Mask from a SOF spin. If you know the tune from Flower Drum Song, sing along:
I seem to have lost my hairdo
And my eye is a seeping pool,
I grin as the graveyard dead do,
I enjoy being a ghoul!
When folks say my gaze is hollow
And I look at fresh graves and drool,
It might be your hearse I follow,
I enjoy being a ghoul!
- Revised lyrics for Halloween by yours truly.

30-Oct-2012 08:10:07

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~~Valour~~
Fall not from the line, friends!
Fight them back.
Let not the blade conquer you!
Push them back.
Stand strong and face your foe!
Hold them back.
Look not in dismay
Let it feed your hunger.
At your burning home.
Let it quench your thirst.
Let it not defeat you,
Let it fuel your spirit.
Fight on, fellow warriors!
For Family!
Give it everything you can muster!
For Friends!
Destroy the enemy!
For Home!
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I wrote a simple war-chant. You'd be amazed what comes to you when you listen to really epic battle music.
~~Leon Coraxe

01-Nov-2012 00:56:44

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A new player joined our clan. You have No Hope of discovering his name. He did spark my muse, however:
There are those that said we'd die;
Shows what they know.
Now we really have No Hope,
And still... we grow!
Though upheavals come and go,
Our rules hold fast.
Based on honor, truth, and strength,
Sith rule will last.

03-Nov-2012 07:19:08

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