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03-Jun-2010 21:42:34
Curse u!! You made me lose
04-Jun-2010 20:25:22
Sorry everyone for not being here. My internet's been acting up for a few weeks now.
07-Jun-2010 15:59:15
Yrolg,
1.1Introduction
1.2Index
1.3Joining, Membership, and Mission Statement
1.4Thread Rules, Guidelines, and Expectations
1.5Tips and Hints for Writing
1.6Tips and Hints for Writing, continued
1.7Tips and Hints for Reading
1.8Tips and Hints for Reading, continued
1.9Poet of the Week
1.10Poem of the Week
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A few things. This is REALLY bothering me.
• 1.9 and 1.10 are switched. Poet is 1.10, not 1.9.
• They have been there for 2 months+. I think that you should seriously take some poems that are written on THIS thread, and post them there. Another thing you should do is the poet of the week from THIS thread, tell how they have exceeded and some other things.
* I think you should make a list of how many poets there are currently active on this thread, and their names, to show how full this thread has gotten.
• I also think that you should post like... a ranking list... such as Beginner, Poet, Poet Extrodinare, blah blah blah... to show all the good peeps and stuff.
• I think art should also be incorporated into this thread. Such as ASCII. If you need me to tell you more about it, just ask.
1.1Introduction
1.2Index
1.3Joining, Membership, and Mission Statement
1.4Thread Rules, Guidelines, and Expectations
1.5Tips and Hints for Writing
1.6Tips and Hints for Writing, continued
1.7Tips and Hints for Reading
1.8Tips and Hints for Reading, continued
1.9Poet of the Week
1.10Poem of the Week
----
A few things. This is REALLY bothering me.
• 1.9 and 1.10 are switched. Poet is 1.10, not 1.9.
• They have been there for 2 months+. I think that you should seriously take some poems that are written on THIS thread, and post them there. Another thing you should do is the poet of the week from THIS thread, tell how they have exceeded and some other things.
* I think you should make a list of how many poets there are currently active on this thread, and their names, to show how full this thread has gotten.
• I also think that you should post like... a ranking list... such as Beginner, Poet, Poet Extrodinare, blah blah blah... to show all the good peeps and stuff.
• I think art should also be incorporated into this thread. Such as ASCII. If you need me to tell you more about it, just ask.
08-Jun-2010 04:27:53 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2010 04:28:06 by [#J2YKVQ2SL]
Mr MechaWiz,
Hello. This concerns your poem on post 1 of the previous page.
I thought that your verse was rather elementary, which is not to say bad. You had a fairly decent rendition of it, though you do warp it through inconsistencies in the piece. One such place is the word "ridiculous" and its derivation. It doesn't flow well, its accents are opposite to those that you're using. I'd suggest finding a replacement.
Also, I think you're falling into the trap of trying to say something one way, and you sacrifice a lot of your meaning through it. The problem some poets have with rhyming metre is that it constricts how they can phrase certain things.
Overall, it was a decent poem.
Hello. This concerns your poem on post 1 of the previous page.
I thought that your verse was rather elementary, which is not to say bad. You had a fairly decent rendition of it, though you do warp it through inconsistencies in the piece. One such place is the word "ridiculous" and its derivation. It doesn't flow well, its accents are opposite to those that you're using. I'd suggest finding a replacement.
Also, I think you're falling into the trap of trying to say something one way, and you sacrifice a lot of your meaning through it. The problem some poets have with rhyming metre is that it constricts how they can phrase certain things.
Overall, it was a decent poem.
10-Jun-2010 14:19:53
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