Would it maybe help if "R" was changed to "Renna*d"?
There are no lorefails in the new version, the old/current version on the other hand completely contradicted Captain Dulcin's journal with its portrayal of the early Kinshra ;/.
And no, the old/current version didn't have great storytelling. To put things mildly, it was a boring simple timeline of events, and would completely fail to capture the attention of non-lorehounds. The updated version actually has EMOTION behind it, and that makes it a much more enjoyable read.
You never were our brightest star, Khazard. 'Vermin slaughtered like lambs'? What does that even mean?
13-Apr-2015 20:35:17
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