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For the same reason, I don't think this bit should be here...
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In the years that followed, the rivalry between the knights was the only threat the kingdom faced, apart from the barbarian invasions from the west.
Actually, if it hadn't been for me, not even the barbarian invasions would've been mentioned; The first doc sent to Stu didn't even mention those and said that the rivalry was the only threat.
Chapter 6:
1) I think the bit about them not liking being called that was added by Jagex. However: That brings me to a separate but related point of my own. See, I had the "White Knights" referred to throughout the text as the "Knights of Falador". This is what the novels call them, so I figure that's probably their "real" name in the same way that "the Kinshra" is the real name of the black knights. If we do alter this, then Jagex's bit about them not liking the name wouldn't apply anymore.
2) I'll give my opinion on the Guthixian balance thing at the end.
3) I'm not sure; I was thinking of maybe leaving it open to interpretation whether the Kinshra are "true" Zamorakians or not, but I can probably be persuaded otherwise.
Chapter 8:
1) Yeah... Dark rituals weren't originally in there. It was originally "Some said his longevity was a gift from Zamorak, who had further plans for him."
2) Discussed with Hazeel earlier in the thread, actually.
Chapter 9:
1) "wealth" wasn't originally in there; It was Original message details are unavailable.
With the loss of his influence, there was no longer anything to allow the Kinshra further time in Falador. Thus did the members of the order, now leaderless and with bitterness in their hearts, prepare for the journey north. On the day of their departure, the Kinshra declared that they would no longer recognise the legitimacy of King Raddallin’s government or his claim to the throne.
(cont)
In the years that followed, the rivalry between the knights was the only threat the kingdom faced, apart from the barbarian invasions from the west.
Actually, if it hadn't been for me, not even the barbarian invasions would've been mentioned; The first doc sent to Stu didn't even mention those and said that the rivalry was the only threat.
Chapter 6:
1) I think the bit about them not liking being called that was added by Jagex. However: That brings me to a separate but related point of my own. See, I had the "White Knights" referred to throughout the text as the "Knights of Falador". This is what the novels call them, so I figure that's probably their "real" name in the same way that "the Kinshra" is the real name of the black knights. If we do alter this, then Jagex's bit about them not liking the name wouldn't apply anymore.
2) I'll give my opinion on the Guthixian balance thing at the end.
3) I'm not sure; I was thinking of maybe leaving it open to interpretation whether the Kinshra are "true" Zamorakians or not, but I can probably be persuaded otherwise.
Chapter 8:
1) Yeah... Dark rituals weren't originally in there. It was originally "Some said his longevity was a gift from Zamorak, who had further plans for him."
2) Discussed with Hazeel earlier in the thread, actually.
Chapter 9:
1) "wealth" wasn't originally in there; It was Original message details are unavailable.
With the loss of his influence, there was no longer anything to allow the Kinshra further time in Falador. Thus did the members of the order, now leaderless and with bitterness in their hearts, prepare for the journey north. On the day of their departure, the Kinshra declared that they would no longer recognise the legitimacy of King Raddallin’s government or his claim to the throne.
(cont)
The Asgarnian ale must flow.
20-Feb-2015 06:54:54 - Last edited on 20-Feb-2015 07:23:16 by William Witt
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