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xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Thx, Capt, I never noticed that mistake. Lol, when I was writing it, I changed it from "looking" to "looked", but I forgot to take off the "-in". I'll be Posting rest of Chapter III soon, after I get a few more opinions.
In case you didn't notice: I also finished the T O C, after hours of debating over good Chapter Names. I hope you liked the character name, Skye.

16-Sep-2007 21:46:29 - Last edited on 17-Sep-2007 02:53:40 by xxDkreignxx

6c91921auvd

6c91921auvd

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Ok, three things that jumped out at me.
1. Chapters could be longer unless this be a short story,
2. Just an off-note I have the name Skye in Knights Of Hope, you can use it, I'm rather bemused by it though,
3. Write more, i've no clue where you are going with this but you could make a brilliant story with this, or make sevral short stories on the thread with the same characters.
Anyway great stuff thus far
Keep writing!!!
Geo-

17-Sep-2007 04:06:26

xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Thx, everyone. I'm finally writing with a Story Concept that I'm more comfortable with, so my writing is incredibly smoother. As you all saw on first post: this is only Part 1 in the Emerald Dragon Series, so don't expect it to be over after this. I'm really happy you guys like my Story.
I'll be adding soon so keep an eye out.
Geo- I was wondering where I'd heard the name Skye before...
EDIT: I actually got it from a TV show character called Skye Richards (I think that's his last name, anyway)

17-Sep-2007 06:26:51 - Last edited on 18-Sep-2007 05:06:26 by xxDkreignxx

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