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Just read it all, it gripped me so much I had to finish it in the same session I started! It's just amazing and I am shocked at the abrupt ending, doubt there will ever be a sequel but I can hope for one.
But on a serious note I just logged in and rushed to Varrock, indulging in reminiscence. Nostalgia for the loss.
EDIT: And by the way, I have an older brother of 19, I can relate to this on a smaller scale(as in the feelings I'd have if my brother felt the way Ed did about Ronny).
But on a serious note I just logged in and rushed to Varrock, indulging in reminiscence. Nostalgia for the loss.
EDIT: And by the way, I have an older brother of 19, I can relate to this on a smaller scale(as in the feelings I'd have if my brother felt the way Ed did about Ronny).
14-Mar-2011 23:19:42 - Last edited on 14-Mar-2011 23:24:35 by A Jx
Hey, A Jx.
Thank you very much for your time reading my story. I just wasted about an hour of your life
! Though seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me, and without the support of readers I wouldn't be here - I would be dead, probably, on a field somewhere
You didn't like the ending? Aww. I kind of like how it leaves you hanging, and things just never quite resolve. As for the sequel, I'd overheard someone once talking about writing an alternative ending to this or change certain things...I think they were just mad at me. Anyway, no reason why you couldn't do the same
.
Actually, I also spent a lot of time in Varrock Palace before and during writing this story. Just getting the feel of being Ronny, you know? I also remember spending a great deal of time in the altar
. But yeah, the place does have a nostalgic feel to it by the story's end.
Oh! So you're the younger brother! From most of the younger brothers who read this story tend to identify with Ronny for some reason. Was that the case for you?
Anyway, thank you for your post, and thank you for letting me know
Thank you very much for your time reading my story. I just wasted about an hour of your life
! Though seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me, and without the support of readers I wouldn't be here - I would be dead, probably, on a field somewhere
You didn't like the ending? Aww. I kind of like how it leaves you hanging, and things just never quite resolve. As for the sequel, I'd overheard someone once talking about writing an alternative ending to this or change certain things...I think they were just mad at me. Anyway, no reason why you couldn't do the same
.
Actually, I also spent a lot of time in Varrock Palace before and during writing this story. Just getting the feel of being Ronny, you know? I also remember spending a great deal of time in the altar
. But yeah, the place does have a nostalgic feel to it by the story's end.
Oh! So you're the younger brother! From most of the younger brothers who read this story tend to identify with Ronny for some reason. Was that the case for you?
Anyway, thank you for your post, and thank you for letting me know
15-Mar-2011 10:34:34
At first I could easily compare mine and Ronny's similarities, until I read on and realised he was a bit more 'lethal' than I could ever imagine myself.
I must've used the wrong words(or more likely it was my crap English)but I loved the whole story including the ending, what I meant by 'abrupt' was my bad explanation of meaning I didn't want that to be the end, I wanted there to be more story to read.
Thanks for replying
EDIT: I also never read out of my own free will, normally I consider it a waste of time but in my opinion, this was time well spent.
I must've used the wrong words(or more likely it was my crap English)but I loved the whole story including the ending, what I meant by 'abrupt' was my bad explanation of meaning I didn't want that to be the end, I wanted there to be more story to read.
Thanks for replying
EDIT: I also never read out of my own free will, normally I consider it a waste of time but in my opinion, this was time well spent.
15-Mar-2011 18:54:22 - Last edited on 15-Mar-2011 18:56:08 by A Jx
Oooh, Ronny is a bad ass
. I suppose, like the good brother you are, you often tell your brother you love him, yes? And which parts of Ronny did you find similar to yourself, if not the lethal part?
Don't worry, your English is excellent. And I always reply, so no biggie there. As I said, this is perhaps a starting point so you can let your imagination run wild and make up the rest
I'm glad you didn't regret reading hehe. Someone once told me that - not gonna make the same mistake again, hopefully!
P.S. What compelled you to read this then? Woodcutting...?
. I suppose, like the good brother you are, you often tell your brother you love him, yes? And which parts of Ronny did you find similar to yourself, if not the lethal part?
Don't worry, your English is excellent. And I always reply, so no biggie there. As I said, this is perhaps a starting point so you can let your imagination run wild and make up the rest
I'm glad you didn't regret reading hehe. Someone once told me that - not gonna make the same mistake again, hopefully!
P.S. What compelled you to read this then? Woodcutting...?
15-Mar-2011 19:23:39 - Last edited on 15-Mar-2011 19:36:36 by Englishkid62
Well like you say on your first post in this thread, we don't tell our brother's we love them, but in my case I suppose I never have. But inside we both know.
Well I could compare myself to a smaller scale, when you write that Ronny would say his life isn't worth living, I would say that mine doesn't have alot in it.
And when you say that he feels a machine(the world) could run with a part missing(him) I feel the same, I'm not depressed but can really relate to this character, also looking back, the ignorance and naivety I would have shown as a young child.
'In a lethal way' Ronny is emotionally alone, whereas I have my families' love and support and feel that my life is worth living, but as said above I feel theres not alot going, its either work or college. Not alot of free time to do what 'I' want to do.
'Don't worry, your English is excellent.' Thanks, and just tell me if I'm going a bit too in depth of my own life story haha.
'P.S. What compelled you to read this then? Woodcutting...?'
No haha I'm not a bored skiller, I just thought for a night I wouldn't log into Runescape, I'd venture the forums like I did 3 years ago(I came back to Runescape last month). Fortunately I noticed you had a few threads on page one of the Story forum so at a random guess I chose 'Brotherly love'. I'm still thinking about this story, I guess all I can say is: Your an amazing author/writer
Well I could compare myself to a smaller scale, when you write that Ronny would say his life isn't worth living, I would say that mine doesn't have alot in it.
And when you say that he feels a machine(the world) could run with a part missing(him) I feel the same, I'm not depressed but can really relate to this character, also looking back, the ignorance and naivety I would have shown as a young child.
'In a lethal way' Ronny is emotionally alone, whereas I have my families' love and support and feel that my life is worth living, but as said above I feel theres not alot going, its either work or college. Not alot of free time to do what 'I' want to do.
'Don't worry, your English is excellent.' Thanks, and just tell me if I'm going a bit too in depth of my own life story haha.
'P.S. What compelled you to read this then? Woodcutting...?'
No haha I'm not a bored skiller, I just thought for a night I wouldn't log into Runescape, I'd venture the forums like I did 3 years ago(I came back to Runescape last month). Fortunately I noticed you had a few threads on page one of the Story forum so at a random guess I chose 'Brotherly love'. I'm still thinking about this story, I guess all I can say is: Your an amazing author/writer
15-Mar-2011 20:23:30 - Last edited on 15-Mar-2011 20:27:04 by A Jx
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