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Mini Chapter: Zemouregal's Wrath
Elisa gasped as Hexa's Ice Barrage was easily deflected by the Lich. [Author Note: A lich is a type of necromancer who summons undead and has a skeletal form] The lich was wearing black armour covered with black robes. He also had a Dragon Longsword in one hand. In the place of a human face was a skull with glowing red eyes like burning coal. The Lich was called Zemouregal, one of the Mahjarrat who sided with Zamorak.
"Your magicks need more working, human."sneered Zemouregal as he lunged at Hexa with his Longsword. Valior, who was slumped on the floor quickly sprang up and stabbed Zemouregal's arm with him Chaotic Rapier. Zemouregal knocked down Valior with his elbow. Elisa rapidly fired magical shots from her Zaryte Bow which flew through the air. However, the shots were dissolved in a red forcefield which Zemouregal created around him.
"You fools cannot compete with the power of a Mahjarrat!"laughed Zemouregal. He summoed five skeletons which closed in on the three adventurers. Just in the nick of time, Hexa took out some runes and teleported away with Elisa and Valior. Valior remembered hearing Zemouregal shout in rage before teleporting.

20-Jun-2011 08:25:47

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Chapter 15: The Wildy
15 minutes later, the participants of the contest were standing near the Wilderness Wall, the wall which separates the mainland from the Wilderness. The participants were standing at the northern end of Varrock along with King Roald. Zen was equipped with his standard Adamant Armour but he didn't carry his Kiteshield. He bought a few Adamant Daggers and some runes to cast Fire Bolts.
In his rucksack, Zen carried 4 doses of a Strength Potion and a few Tunas. The Wilderness was a land of outlaws and undead, but it was also a place where many people kill each other. It was by no means a safe place.
Zen looked at the other people, who looked as skilled as Zen. The man with the Adamant 2 Handed Sword, who was called Lazaar laughed.
"Remember weaklings, do not stand in my way or you will feel both my fist and my sword!"
Zen heeded his words. A few minutes before the participants stood near the Wall, Zen saw a Black Knight attack Lazaar. Lazaar had quickly turned around and smashed the Black Knight with his brutal sword and killed him with one hit.
There was also another Mage who was highly skilled in Magic and he was capable of casting the spell known as Ice Barrage. The spell trapped the opponent in a huge block of ice and froze them for 40 seconds.
King Roald addressed the crowd.
"Well adventurers, the first diamond is here. You must get it in the next 6 hours. I will say that it has quite a strong guardian. Good luck!"
King Roald walked away leaving the adventurers to make their first few steps into the Wilderness.

23-Jun-2011 07:32:54

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*gasps* OMG! Your space-after-punctuation-thingy did improve! *bows in utter reverence*
On another note, a writer never uses numerical stuff in their story.
"Seventy persons were instantly incinerated by the thunderous blast of power" looks better than "70 persons were instantly incinerated by the thunderous blast of power."
Unless, of course, you are telling complex numbers like 9898989.

23-Jun-2011 07:44:02

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