All you did was delete one or two sentences, and it doesn't really make a difference one way or another. Users are allowed to post whatever they want so long as it's reasonable, semi-realistic, and makes sense. You don't really need to ask if your posts are better, just imagine yourself in the RP and think what you would do. It would be advantageous to describe Annie's actions more often, don't tell me she's doing something,
show
me what she's doing.
But, as I already said, users can control Ironwolf, Atatos, and the other forces in a reactionary form if they please. You can mention Ironwolf tries to hit Annie but she dodged the attack, as Ironwolf is quite huge, heavily armoured, constantly attacked by multiple opponents, and thus slow-moving.
Annie1227
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Can my charater hit the Ironwolf?
I already said you could with details D:
Wasted,
I'm not sure what you mean by divots in regards to Ironwolf's chainmail armour, but yes, her mail and gambeson would be damaged a bit from so many hits and projectiles. I do like your idea of using hallucinations, to distract Ironwolf and allow the wounded to be taken out of the fighting, that's some good thinking.