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Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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George, last page
Additional motivation will probably come sooner or later. Rory is a violent-minded fellow, all he needs is a little direction or a means to use his violence. He likes danger, so why not have an adventure?

If a city would be destroyed, well, they’d have to stop the bad guys or die! But, sometimes, people do big things without caring, or out of ego.

Annie1227 said :
Ok. Thank you azi. Btw I fixed it. OK!


You ship Elizabeth and Rory, West? XD That made me chuckle, I never thought of that. However, it is a rather good idea that never crossed my mind. The gentleness of a soft-spoken woman can change hard hearts, hence why it appears so often in fairy-tales. Elizabeth, or any other pubescent woman, could also perform this role.

21-Nov-2018 04:07:15

Inferi

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So, to start with here I'm going to apologize. When I first read the post, it shouted "passive-aggressive" at me, and now that I've gone back and read it multiple times I can understand how it could not be that as well.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to read through this and see if there's anything I need to address. I think everyone has put all the points of view out there pretty well, though. Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.

21-Nov-2018 04:08:02

Westenev

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Azi Demonica said :
You ship Elizabeth and Rory, West? XD That made me chuckle, I never thought of that. However, it is a rather good idea that never crossed my mind. The gentleness of a soft-spoken woman can change hard hearts, hence why it appears so often in fairy-tales. Elizabeth, or any other pubescent woman, could also perform this role.

Just try making googley eyes at my Elyssia and I'll end Rory personally.

(This was a joke)
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21-Nov-2018 04:13:06 - Last edited on 21-Nov-2018 04:13:45 by Westenev

Azi Demonica

Azi Demonica

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I think I figured out the main weakness of my latest post: it had too much exposition. Expository vagueness certainly isn't good enough to convey what a character feels or thinks. Will have to keep this in mind next time for sure. Next time, I will mimic other users' style of posting (which would be plagiarism), then attempt to incorporate it with brevity, and see how that works out.

Don't worry, no googly eyes for Elyssia!

George Rozas said :
Elyssia x Annie
Oh god, this made me chuckle awkwardly XD

21-Nov-2018 04:18:01

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