Okay, if this is a double post I don't care because I don't want to edit my last post and maybe have it get missed.
Anyways.
Annie, you need to explain several things to me here.
1) I already said there's no "laser guns" that any of the PCs have access to right now, so unless you're copy/pasting from another bio again, why does she have laser guns?
2) Who, or what, is Urr?
3) If she had to run off from everyone getting killed, how does she suddenly have every piece of gear that she's got there. I sincerely doubt she would have been able to run home and get it.
4) You're saying her father is a politician. From where? Where did they live? Why was he being targeted?
5) If she's 13, how experienced with these weapons of hers are you expecting her to be? I sincerely doubt someone who's a respectful politician would teach all his kids to start using weapons from really early on.
I don't have an issue with the overall character idea, but I do need answers to all that before I can feel comfortable going anywhere with it.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.
20-Jul-2017 13:42:58
