Venom1383
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Just now realized that "Beric Stonefoot" is
really
similar to "Joric Ironfist." It's a coincidence, I swear.
Got the first name from another character and the last name was somthing else initially, but it sounded too noble but I adjusted it and here we are.
THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!
*Kicks Venom off a mountain and into a vat of lemon juice*
Anyways, accepted, but two things first:
1) Silva is the mining town, not Elkwood.
2) "The banner of Greenhaven is a dark green colour with a sword crossing a staff. The knights and guards have this same design on their shields." So his shield wouldn't be unadorned.
Aside from that, everything is good.
Man, the Middle District is really turning out to be quite the multicultural place. Its two lieutenants aren't even human!
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
06-Jul-2015 16:21:33
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NotFishing
NotFishing
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Venom1383
said
:
Just now realized that "Beric Stonefoot" is
really
similar to "Joric Ironfist." It's a coincidence, I swear.
Got the first name from another character and the last name was somthing else initially, but it sounded too noble but I adjusted it and here we are.
THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!
*Kicks Venom off a mountain and into a vat of lemon juice*
Anyways, accepted, but two things first:
1) Silva is the mining town, not Elkwood.
2) "The banner of Greenhaven is a dark green colour with a sword crossing a staff. The knights and guards have this same design on their shields." So his shield wouldn't be unadorned.
Aside from that, everything is good.
Man, the Middle District is really turning out to be quite the multicultural place. Its two lieutenants aren't even human!
It was really late, I saw Elkwood as a "milling town" and read it as "mining town."
You know, I feel as if I have started some sort of dwarven naming trend. We have Joric Ironfist, Balmor Highrock, Beric Stonefoot, and in Champions Guild I'm pretty sure Zed said something about a dwarven king in his introductory post when his teacher asked him a question. His last name was Gold-something.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
Annie1227
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Annie knew that Kuro was danger so she ran fast as an elf to the bridge. She yelled to Kuro,"I'll cover you!" She shot Compressed rock bullets and lighting at the strange creature so she can cover him.
Yo, Annie, quick lesson on sentences.
You don't need to add "so she can cover him" at the end. She already stated that she was going to cover him, so what she does next is presumably to fulfill that very purpose.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.