Hawks:
Let me try to clear up any confusion in that paragraph you posted by explaining my thought process behind it.
(I run for my life, tears still wet on my face, as the werewolves close in. I look back to see they are still behind me, but not by much.) Instinctively, he knows that the werewolves are still chasing him, and can hear occasional snarls and grunts from behind him. He doesn't know if any of the werewolves have given up, branched off or looped around to flank him. He looks back to see they are all bhind him in close pursuit.
(My foot caught in a gnarled old root, and I fell. Hard. I look up to see them upon me now, hunger in their eyes and darkness in their souls.) Again, by instinct, he falls and turns around, knowing he will die. He simply wants to face his death, and not be afraid of it.
(Out of panic, I cannot manage the sword out of its holster, and they are on the kill now. The first one lunges, and then the rest.) They have switched from their pursuit to a kill stance. They are watching, waiting for the alpha male, the one that strikes first. The others attack shortly after.
I hope that clears up that paragraph for you.
21-Apr-2010 04:14:11