Well, other than that, my final statement is to just do what you like doing best your own way. It's also a good idea to build a resistance to harsh criticism early on in your writing career, so when you make a story, sometimes think to yourself, 'If someone didn't like this story, how would I make them like it? Could I have a few chapters to focus on those who found the story too immature? Will I become a better author by focusing on those who aren't my friends, or should I just digest the critics' opinions and still do what I love doing?'
Thoughts like that should help you get closer to originality, as I dare say the story had its fair share of clichés and predictable outcomes. It's also a good foundation to get things that you enjoy from other sources. For example, if you really liked a scene in a movie, novel or play or in a game, you can digest that concept and convert it into your own method.
So, there you go, I hope that helps at least a little bit. Happy typing, and, like the others' works I have reviewed for their first stories, your first story is very good being your first piece of literature. Making stories is difficult and very few people can do it. Even if at times you feel that your story is lacking in something, always remember that even if a story lacks originality and impact, there's no such thing as a bad story, only bad opinion.
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good job Azi, it took you more than 2500 words to get your point across again. -.-
08-Dec-2011 05:24:01
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