Bookmarked.
I liked the ending to 'The Demon's Secret', but I found some obvious referrences to my old story, The Second Demon War: Silverlight, creator of the vampires being a Demon, and Silverlight being used to kill vampires.
Hopefully, I'm wrong and it's not Silverlight (which I doubt), but it's too similar in comparison to my story. No way to change it, unfortunately, but I thought you should know that.
EDIT: Oh, good lord... that was just horrible! How the heck could a staff fit into a bag and then be hidden under someone's cloak without the other noticing it was there? Completely unrealistic!
By the way, I've done Temple of Ikov and therefore know how big Armadyl's Staff is; it definitely wouldn't fit in ANY bag.
sEDIT: Well, that explains why Lucien is a crazy, sadistic *BEEP!*; he lost it once, and still wants it.
Side Note: Notice how I'm posting all my comments on one Post to conserve Posts for this thread.
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