Thank you for the corrections
. Without you, they'd go unnoticed.
And, I share your worries. I fell into the same problem during Dragon Wars and Guild of Jades. The characters either ended up under-developed, over-developed, or pointless. But I plotted all of the MAJOR characters in this story and I got three (Valkyrie, the Royal One, and Jack the Bounty Hunter). The Royal One isn't really even that important.
So I think I'll be able to balance two characters
.
. Without you, they'd go unnoticed.
And, I share your worries. I fell into the same problem during Dragon Wars and Guild of Jades. The characters either ended up under-developed, over-developed, or pointless. But I plotted all of the MAJOR characters in this story and I got three (Valkyrie, the Royal One, and Jack the Bounty Hunter). The Royal One isn't really even that important.
So I think I'll be able to balance two characters
.
27-Aug-2010 02:11:34