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Yrolg, im realy enjoying your story, what with the stunning
detial and emotion and realy the whole thing is spectacular.
Being new to this forum and to writing storie's I was hoping
you could swing by my thread and take a look at it to let
me know how im doing so far, I keep thinking that maybe
im starting it out too boring.
If you do look at it thanks a bunch
49-50-332-58547559
detial and emotion and realy the whole thing is spectacular.
Being new to this forum and to writing storie's I was hoping
you could swing by my thread and take a look at it to let
me know how im doing so far, I keep thinking that maybe
im starting it out too boring.
If you do look at it thanks a bunch
49-50-332-58547559
22-Mar-2009 09:19:59
The reading ease: 1/3 I don't know if the story was just plain dull, or if my brain is dead.... I had a hard time understanding what was happening. We were here, then we were there... it was like it was three separate stories. Sorry
The plot: 2/3 LIke i said above, didn't manage to understand much... but what i did catch was ok...
over all grade: 1/10 you get 0/2 pts for how easy it is to read, 0/3 pts for humor, 1/3 pts for action, 0/2 pts for good story flow/originality
Sorry man
(you signed "taco"!! you can't flame me! no be hurts meh!!!! *cries*)
The plot: 2/3 LIke i said above, didn't manage to understand much... but what i did catch was ok...
over all grade: 1/10 you get 0/2 pts for how easy it is to read, 0/3 pts for humor, 1/3 pts for action, 0/2 pts for good story flow/originality
Sorry man
(you signed "taco"!! you can't flame me! no be hurts meh!!!! *cries*)
03-Apr-2009 02:57:18 - Last edited on 03-Apr-2009 03:02:10 by Pigwig70
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