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Serene End
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"Heh heh. I might actually like this." The morning sun rose several hours later, Marcello was on top of a roof as he gazed at the sky. He watched the clouds move as he laid down with his hands behind his head. He sighed. "It's been quite a while since we endured somethin' like that." he mumbled.

The buildings were burnt down, and the snow slowly began to melt away. The snowstorm that hit Varrock moved to Abitante. Marcello looked at all that has happened lately. He stood to his feet with his hands in his pockets. "I feel like we've got a whole lot more in our future."

Meanwhile, back at Abitante. Abaddon flew to the top of the Raven Reaper's castle, in the sight of hundreds of people who didn't pay attention. Abaddon raised his left hand into the air and the white snow that fell from the sky began to fall crimson red.

The citizens took notices of this. When a Zamorakian priest looked up at the roof of the Raven Reaper's castle, he glanced upon a tall man with black angel wings. He immediately knew who it was. His eyes widened, then he fell to the ground.

He pointed at Abaddon. "I-It's him! The First Born Child of Evil!! The Angel of Death, Abaddon!!!" the priest panicked.

The others look up at where the priest pointed and saw nothing. "You crazy cretin, there isn't-" a man tried to say.

Abaddon suddenly appeared in-front of man. "Another deaf imbecile." Abaddon said to the man.

The crowd gasped. The man fell to the floor and began to crawl away from Abaddon. "Wha-where the hell did you come from?!"

"You shall be purged from this land."

"Gimme the hell outta here!" he began to run away from Abaddon.

"Fool." Abaddon looks at the back of the man and a multitude of snap noises filled the air. The man fell to the ground and grabbed his legs. He screamed out in pain. "My legs!!!! They hurt so badly!!! Please Saradomin, make it stop!!!" he screamed off the top of his lungs.
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23-Sep-2009 00:22:19

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Abaddon walks over to the man and shook his head side-to-side. "Your false gods cannot help you." Another loud snapping noise is heard. Abaddon has snapped the man's neck without him laying a finger. The crowd gasped with a expression of terror written all over their faces. Abaddon looks at all the people in the crowd.

"I have returned. Your false gods cannot help you, for I am the only true god. Forsake your futile faiths, and worship your new god."

Forcefully, everybody knew if they opposed, they would surely be killed without mercy. Everybody got to their knees and bowed before Abaddon. "All hail the Angel of Death!" the crowd chanted. Abaddon stood there with his eyes closed as everyone continued to chant those words.

Back at Varrock and with Marcello. He was on his feet, thinking and looking at all that has happened. He closed his eyes and took in a breath. "Today seems like a new day, a new chapter in life." he mumbled. He opened up his eyes. "I'm certain of it."

He took a few steps forward and looked up at the sky. "I feel like.." a wind of 10 mph passed him. "..a new wind is blowin' unlike any other I've ever felt."
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The wind Marcello Saif-Al-Din felt pass him was the winds of change, for better or worse. He may not know it yet, but the world is in for many changes ahead. But with all this madness and chaos, what will become of our fellow heroes? What will time do to our heroes? Will time destroy them? Or perhaps save them.

It is unknown at this time for only in the end may we find the lost truth of time's decision. But as the hands of time continue to move, so will the civilization of the world. But for how long will this blood flow, and will we see an end?

That is beyond what mere mortals can answer. But in the meantime, continue to watch the stars pass, and pray that we shall see an end to this Crimson.

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23-Sep-2009 00:28:06

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Since I didn't have enough characters on the last post, I added this one.

Thank you very much for reading Part 1. Part 2 will be posted on this thread, so no need for "OMG! TWO WEEK WAIT FTL!" comments. (though I have never gotten them, thank goodness :P )

I very much appreciate the support I have received, but I'm sure everybody knows that by now. :P

Thanks again, much appreciated,
~Biomaster7
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23-Sep-2009 00:31:39

Seph
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OMG! TWO WEEK WAIT FT-


*Gets tackled by Marcello*


:o


So he thinks he's the only god out there? Thats NOT TRUE! You see, the other god's just don't advertise often! They need to get their name out there, tell people about themselves! :D


Pwnage ending. Although still no match for the others. This one was a dependant chapter - without the others to help give it affect, it isnt half as good. Yet add the rest of Crimson, and Wha-la - pwnage.


We really need to hold a in-game party sometime soon. I'm getting tired of not pwning ark. =.=


Glad to have known you people for all this time - Runescape wouldn't be half as fun otherwise. ;)


~Wigwam126
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23-Sep-2009 00:57:47

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I try, I try. But I haven't had the time to hold an in-game party. :| I'll try sometime.

And this chapter was more like an ending without the battling, kinda like a Plot chapter. But I bet cha one geepee that the Part 2 ending will be much more violent than any other I've done. But again, that's why it's called Crimson, right? :P

And well, I guess if you're the only living god, I guess you can get a bighead. >.>

And I'm glad to have such good fans like you all. I always look forward to your comments 'cause they always make me laugh and smile. :)

P.S: Marcello pjed you. O_o

Bad Marcello. No peanut butter and jelly sandwiches for you.

Marcello: :(

~Biomaster7
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23-Sep-2009 01:58:48 - Last edited on 23-Sep-2009 01:59:15 by Serene End

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Awesomeness :D Though it really doesn't seem too pleasant to serve Abaddon... first guy he sees gets painfully killed for no reason O_o Ah well, tis the way of a villain.

I've been wondering if the moon is a pun on the phrase "once in a blue moon"... By the way how would a blue moon show up against a blue sky O_o

Saloman's evil smirks... everytime we turn around this guy's got another evil grin or laugh or suspicious activity going on and Marcello manages to overlook them all :@ Silly hero, smirks are for VILLAINS O_O


The Last Scene, As George Lucas would do it.

Raven: Lord Abaddon.

Abaddon: Yes my bird-head.

Raven: Rise.

(Abaddon levitates upwards)

Lev: Father...

Abaddon: Where is Padme? Is she all right?

Lev: Who?

Raven: I'm afraid, in your anger, you have killed her.

Abaddon: What? No, that's impossible... She was ALIVE, I felt it!

Lev: What in the world are you two talking about?

(Abaddon grabs a Raven Reaper and drains his life through the black veins)

Lev: JEEZ! Bill? You okay Bill? Man dad, you have anger management issues.

Abaddon: Father?

Lev: Um... I said Dad but yeah, you're my father....

Abaddon: That one time in Karamja... I knew those bannanas were spiked...

Nyx: This is getting progressively weirder.

Raven: You must destroy the Assassin-Hunter Temple. Only then will the galaxy be ours to control.

Lev: So... we've perfected space-travel?

Raven: Technicality.

Nyx: I'd say that's a pretty big "technicality."

Abaddon: I will now jump onto the roof dramatically and look out. I will require a random assassin to stand by my side so I can cross my arms evilly.

Lev: You need another guy to cross your arms?

Abaddon: After years of being absolutely still, it seems my arms have fallen asleep.

Nyx:...

* * *

(Saloman hands a baby to Marcello)

Marcello: Wait, so if this is Episode 3 this is Abaddon's son right?

Saloman: Yes.

Marcello: But Lev was just in that last scene.

Saloman: Then whose...

Vezyfher: Don't ask, don't tell.

???

23-Sep-2009 23:48:43

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Ah and further links of Abaddon to Darth Vader: Abaddon Force Chokes a man!



And Now I have to hire a bodyguard to handle fighting Wigwam... Sephiroth's still on vacation so... Hey how about you new guy?

Abaddon:...

Strong silent type eh? I can work with that. So, how do feel about walloping a Wigwam?

Abaddon:...

...

Abaddon: I would like that very much new friend.

Well okay then :D

23-Sep-2009 23:52:36

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Yeah, well. Every villain HAS to have a badass moment. :P (go ahead Ephraim Windsor, sue me)

And Abaddon didn't K0 that Raven Reaper for no reason.

1. Learn his language.

2. Learn names.

3. Know his memories (because going into an Age that is 5 ages ahead of the one you were just in isn't fun o.o).

And the blue moon appeared at night, not the daytime. :P And the date and the blue moon is a reference to something. Something all of you've read. ^_^

And Lev technically isn't Abaddon's son. His past has made him think that Abaddon IS his blood-related father. Plus, he has that birthmark, so he thinks he is his son. Like Acubens and Raven. And whoever the Failure is. >_>

But Abaddon can be just like Darth Vader. Watch:

Darth Abaddon: *walks closer to Lev* There is no escape. Don't make me destroy you. *pauses* Lev, you do not yet realize your importance. You have only begun to discover your power. Join me, and I will complete your training. With our combined strength, we can end this destructive conflict and bring order to the galaxy.

Lev: I'll never join you!

Darth Abaddon: If you only knew the power of the Dark Side. Salomon never told you what happened to your father.

Lev: He told me enough! He told me you killed him!

Darth Abaddon: No. I am your father.

Lev: No. No. That's not true. That's impossible!

Darth Abaddon: Search your feelings, you know it to be true!

Lev: *cries in anguish* No! No!

Editor: Wait a minute. *record pause* What the hell is this?

Abaddon: *looks at Editor* What? Is it time for my close up?

Editor: *shakes head* No. No. No. This is all wrong.

Lev: What do ya mean?

Editor: This..! It's all wrong!

Abaddon: Well, I don't care. *snaps editor's neck*

Lev: Oh K0!

Biomaster: O_o

Lev: *looks at Abaddon* Ya wanna kill her too?

Biomaster: *looks at Lev* I can pwn you in a minute. *shows magic keyboard* With dis!

Dante: *randomly enters scene* There it is! *snatches keyboard and walks away*
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24-Sep-2009 00:25:02 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2009 00:25:29 by Serene End

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Biomaster: Well...doesn't that suck..

Abaddon: *looks at Biomaster* I could pk you in a second.

Biomaster: ORLY?

Lev: YA RLY.

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And that's how Abaddon and Lev got there roles. DER END!!! o.o

~Biomaster7
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24-Sep-2009 00:27:18

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awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pie rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!life rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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