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The Level

The Level

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The basement was cool and dark, a welcome contradiction to the sweltering early June heat. The cries of children at play and the honking of irritated drivers could not penetrate the concrete walls, so for the moment I sat in silence against one of the walls, several empty bottles of liquor scattered around me and a small picture frame on my lap.

Alcohol laden tears spilled down my cheeks and onto the photograph, blurring my view of the handsome man. I wiped my nose, and placed the picture of my late husband on the gasoline covered floor. The fumes stung my nose and eyes, and the world swayed around me, a vertiginous kaleidoscope of black and gray.

“Soon we will be together again,” I said aloud, sniffling. I felt my resolve faltering, but with shaking hands I removed a matchbox from my pocket. I struck the first match, but it failed to light. The second one sprang to life, eager to devour the food that I offered.

“I’m insane,” I murmured softly, gazing sorrowfully at the flickering flame. This realization did not bother me however, and I knew with absolute certainty my next move would be irrational and foolish. I threw the match high into the air, tracing its path through the air.

“Level up,” I whispered hoarsely, smiling at my little joke. The match landed in the pool of gasoline, and the inferno whirled towards me, roaring with a hellish fury. I closed my eyes and leaned against the cold wall. Yes, soon we will be together again.

22-Jun-2011 19:28:41

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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I am thinking you are sensing correctly.

I have received a few complaints regarding the element of writing involved with the contest, and would just like to say that it will change dramatically next round. These two rounds were to effectively remove any inactive contestants who would hinder later rounds, as well as look at the calibre of talent to aid some decisions I have to make.

So don't worry if you feel this is moving away from the idea of a story contest. ;)

23-Jun-2011 13:30:11

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