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Chuk

Chuk

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Guard, in response to your response to my review -

There were more errors, I just didn't post them all. Those were examples of what you were doing.

As for the emotion, you had it in one place, there at the end. However, there were other places where it was needed where it was lacking.

If I were only grading that part of the story you would have gotten higher points, but the review applied to the whole story.

30-Dec-2007 11:37:40

Scoucher

Scoucher

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I never post all the mistakes I find in a review -- on my review of Disruption I posted more mistakes than usual, and it ended up being a nine-post review. So that's probably part of the reason he didn't show you all the mistakes.

30-Dec-2007 20:02:40

Scoucher

Scoucher

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True. But another factor is that I usually only copy down their major errors and leave it up to them to fix the rest. And I don't even show them all of the major errors. With this short of a story, it shouldn't be too hard though, as you said.

On another note, will you write more soon? :D

30-Dec-2007 20:23:00

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