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Raschilat

Raschilat

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Okie-dokes. To start off, the only things I saw were commas that had been left out. And I think there was only one, maybe two. For my sake as a Guildmaster, I really hope you just proofread well. :P

Second, since we really haven't seen a whole lot yet, Omega Pen is a tad bit out of reach. when the story plot becomes more defined and such, it's a very good possibility you'll be Omega, Lord Ownage II.

Third, well done! You've got me grasped in a chokehold for more.

Err, wait... >_>

EDIT: You're Gold. XD Ooops. I guess I missed the whole point just then, eh?

~ Guildmaster Scoutehlicious

/~\ I'll fight you until Hell freezes over, then I'll fight you in the ice. /~\

09-Dec-2007 16:06:02 - Last edited on 09-Dec-2007 16:15:12 by Raschilat

Joppi J

Joppi J

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Well, after seeing the controversy about your TAL rank, I decided to investigate myself.

Now, by normal standards, this couldn't make Novelist, because of length, but I think the length requirement has been cut out.

Otherwise, it's good writing, but writing is only half the story. Plot needs to carry your writing, and there hasn't been enough plot yet to make a real assessment of the story. By writing, you'd get Novelist, but you need plot to get it.

Bard means that you're good at describing and telling stories, which you are. There's just not enough plot yet to get you into Novelist.

09-Dec-2007 18:16:15 - Last edited on 09-Dec-2007 18:16:57 by Joppi J

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