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Well, I have not been the best with estimation. I will, however, say this:
YROLG'S REVIEWS IS NOW ACCEPTING APPLICATIONS.
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Yrolg's Reviews, one of the oldest and most respected reviewing establishments on the forums, has once again opened its doors to the Stories Forum community. All users interested in receiving one of the most honest, frank, and helpful reviews of their career should consider applying; all applicants should follow the relevant rules listed in the thread.
Applications will be open from 6 May 2012 - 9 May 2012, so that gives everyone an opportunity to truly get valuable feedback on their pieces. Yrolg's Reviews will be accepting only one piece for reviewal.

06-May-2012 15:38:58

Yrolg

Yrolg

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I think the Stories Forums -- veterans especially -- have been silenced by a blanket of contentedness. I try to write regularly still, but I find it just as difficult as ever to focus my energy exclusively on a single story.
I am hoping to embrace the challenge of curbing this obstacle this coming summer.

17-Jun-2012 22:42:33

Yrolg

Yrolg

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YROLG'S REVIEWS IS NOW ACCEPTING APPLICATIONS.
Quick find code: 49-50-196-58521317
Yrolg's Reviews, one of the oldest and most respected reviewing establishments on the forums, has once again opened its doors to the Stories Forum community. All users interested in receiving one of the most honest, frank, and helpful reviews of their career should consider applying; all applicants should follow the relevant rules listed in the thread.
Applications will be open from 30 June 2012 - 9 July 2012, so that gives everyone an opportunity to truly get valuable feedback on their pieces. Yrolg's Reviews will be accepting only one piece for adjudication, and applications will be considered on the basis of first submission, finished product, and prior feedback.

30-Jun-2012 23:12:48

Chosen Worf

Chosen Worf

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Application:
Username: Emperor Worf
Story Title: When Breathing Stops
Quick Find Code: 49-50-711-63788458
Type of Story: Short Story, finished.
Length: Two posts.
How would you like your review formatted*? Rubric first, then your comments, I suppose. The order really isn't too important to me. :P May I post this review on your story's thread?: Yes.
Literary Tools: 112/140
--Description: 25/30
--Voice: 17/25
--Symbolism: 20/25
--Depth: 17/20
--Analysis: 18/20
--Word Choice: 15/20

Structure: 110/120
--Format: 35/40
--Grammar: 28/30
--Usage: 18/20
--Sentence Configuration: 14/15
--Basics: 15/15
Plot: 53/75
--Development: 18/30
--Intricacy: 10/15
--Consistency: 15/15
--Originality: 10/15
Other: 84/90
--Impact: 17/20
--Flow: 19/20
--Conclusion: 14/15
--Theme: 14/15
--Empathetic Ties: 10/10
--Title Relevance: 10/10


Total: 359/430
*fingers crossed*
EDIT: I'm terribly sorry, but I messed up on my math the first time I posted the rubric.
EDIT2: The story is finished.

01-Jul-2012 02:37:55 - Last edited on 01-Jul-2012 03:45:51 by Chosen Worf

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