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aBugfromMars

aBugfromMars

Posts: 4,570 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Application:
Username: Nightmare7-6
Story Title: K2: Armageddon
Quick Find Code: 49-50-210-59748099
Type of Story: Action/Adventure, full story.
Length: 61-ish posts.
May I post this review on your story's thread?: Of ocurse.

Literary Tools: 92/150
--Description: 25/40
--Voice: 15/25
--Symbolism: 15/25
--Depth: 16/20
--Analysis: 14/20
--Word Choice: 12/20
--Juxtaposition: 5/10

Structure: 95/120
--Format: 30/40
--Grammar: 25/30
--Usage: 16/20
--Sentence Configuration: 11/15
--Basics: 13/15
Plot: 72/100
--Development: 29/40
--Intricacy: 21/30
--Consistency: 9/15
--Originality: 13/15
Other: 63/90
--Impact: 14/20
--Flow: 13/20
--Conclusion: 13/15
--Theme: 10/15
--Empathetic Ties: 4/10
--Title Relevance: 9/10
Layout: 50/60
--Introduction: 20/30
--Overall Appearance: 14/20
--Title Page: 7/15
--Chapter Configuration: 9/15

Total: 372/520

If you're not taking reviews currently, I apologise.
Thank you either way, though!

14-Dec-2009 23:28:37

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Nightmare7-6,
Hello. Applications were not being accepted, and you therefore breached one of this thread's rules. In accordance with stated policy, your application is denied. I must also ask that you do not apply again for two weeks, or until Thursday, December 31st. I strongly encourage you and all other applicants to carefully read my guidelines to applying before posting.
Thank you.

17-Dec-2009 21:15:53

aBugfromMars

aBugfromMars

Posts: 4,570 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Okay.
I couldn't really find it, though. Towers and towers of writing...I may have overlooked it...Err..
The review you currently have listed you said you'd finish by April 30th. Must've gotten sorta busy, huh?
Anyways, BUMP, and thanks...

17-Dec-2009 21:38:26

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
The recipient of the review never came to claim it. It was therefore never posted. ;)
The "towers and towers" of rules are the twelve points listed directly before the application.

17-Dec-2009 22:02:51 - Last edited on 17-Dec-2009 22:03:22 by Yrolg

Chuk

Chuk

Posts: 14,177 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Application:
Username: iChuk
Story Title: Echoes of the Gods
Quick Find Code: 49-50-675-54807496
Type of Story: Full story, unfinished. (However, I expect to finish it within a week or two, so it may be finished if you take that long to review it.
Length: ~85,000 words
May I post this review on your story's thread?: Yes, please do.

Literary Tools: 117/150
--Description: 32/40
--Voice: 21/25
--Symbolism: 15/25
--Depth: 12/20
--Analysis: 15/20
--Word Choice: 16/20
--Juxtaposition: 6/10

Structure: 101/120
--Format: 34/40
--Grammar: 27/30
--Usage: 16/20
--Sentence Configuration: 11/15
--Basics: 13/15
Plot: 68/100
--Development: 30/40
--Intricacy: 19/30
--Consistency: 12/15
--Originality: 7/15
Other: 55/90
--Impact: 10/20
--Flow: 15/20
--Conclusion: 8/15
--Theme: 7/15
--Empathetic Ties: 7/10
--Title Relevance: 8/10
Layout: 62/60
--Introduction: 25/30
--Overall Appearance: 18/20
--Title Page: 7/15
--Chapter Configuration: 12/15

Total: 2457/520
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17-Dec-2009 22:40:58 - Last edited on 20-Feb-2010 02:14:20 by Chuk

Yrolg

Yrolg

Posts: 25,296 Sapphire Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
iChuck,
Hello. Unfortunately, your application was incorrectly filled out. This proves to me that you did not follow all of the directions listed before the application, and forces me to decline your application. You may apply again in two weeks, on December 31st.

17-Dec-2009 23:06:19

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