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rdhof
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rdhof

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I read the first 8 pages and I could not read anymore. So I want to know what happens in the story because I have like no time to read it ALL. But for everthing that I read so far was great. Sorry I can't read it all, but I have like no time to read it!! Sorry!! But after everything that I read it sounded very interesting and quite gross!

10-Feb-2008 03:45:51

Venmi

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Thanks for at least trying to read it. I must say that now I can do way better.
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10-Feb-2008 03:55:02

Venmi

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I have the idea, but it's how to put it in to text. I want to be explosive, not blah blah blah!
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10-Feb-2008 16:39:15

Venmi

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Would you still be able to get on the forums just to read the story but not comment?
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10-Feb-2008 17:01:56 - Last edited on 10-Feb-2008 17:02:05 by Venmi

Vercingterox

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hey i liek the series but i flipped trought 8 pages and it telported me to the last page wierd thougth when i read all of it it made sence so it was like the wirting changed on differnt pages id also like to se SARDIOM DOSENT HAVE A DAUGHTER HE HAS A SON AND HIS NAME Is

IKOV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

10-Feb-2008 17:12:26

Venmi

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So what if he doesn't have a daughter. It's an idea of my own. I didn't think Saradomin had a son; I guess I was wrong. Hey, Mega, is what Darth saying here is correct?
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10-Feb-2008 17:17:34

Chuk

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I don't think it really matters.
To my knowledge -- after four years of playing this game and reading the lores and histories -- Saradomin doesn't have a child.
But that's called creative license; you can do as you please in your story.
One thing I have found that seems awkward: You are trying to tell the story from a first person point of view, yet you also want to describe what other characters are doing while they're not around you. That doesn't work very well.
You do break it up so it's better than it could be, but it would be even better if you left all 'we's 'I's and other words of that sort out of the portions of the story where you are writing about the other characters as they do other things not around you. I'm only on page 24, so I haven't read a lot of it, but I thought I'd go ahead and point that out.

11-Feb-2008 01:04:36 - Last edited on 11-Feb-2008 01:27:16 by Chuk

Ur HeartBeat

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yeah I can still read it, but I wanted to comment on the last chapter :P lol oh well at least I'll still read.

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Saradomin never had a child. In the Temple of Ikov quest, Lucien asks to get the Armadyl staff, so I think Ikov was just a follower of Armadyl. Not sure about that but I am sure that Saradomin never had a child.

11-Feb-2008 13:28:28 - Last edited on 11-Feb-2008 18:35:25 by Ur HeartBeat

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