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Outcast501
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Outcast501

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prince u need to wait hes central time (i think) 5 hours behind gmt0 and he dose have thing to do than right storys all time like
THINK OF BETTER WAYS TO CARRY HIS STORY ON
clan work
and what ever else super mbts(c)t dose
Commander Zilyana pet drop! total of 2488 kills, 362 in hard mode.

I got no friends and I hide my face, it gets lonely in my happy place. I'm an Outcast through and true

13-Sep-2007 18:25:15

Evil 110088

Evil 110088

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greetings i posted last night and was wondering what this clan is. does mb have a clan? somone fill me in please.

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13-Sep-2007 22:28:01 - Last edited on 13-Sep-2007 22:44:03 by Evil 110088

Venmi

Venmi

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107 Sissy, and everyone else, I am so sorry for the lack of chapters. I've had a lot of real life issues dealing with friends that's downed my mood to write, and school really isn't helping. I'm also watching Claymore on a video site, which I cannot reveal due to rule 11, but, on a positive note, that's a reason why I'm not writing.
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14-Sep-2007 11:11:09 - Last edited on 14-Sep-2007 11:12:01 by Venmi

uqgbqyihvkl

uqgbqyihvkl

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I read this and to tell you the truth, it wasn't as good as everyone said. Things happened swiftly, you didn't play each part out; that is a key concept in a story like this.
Above all of that though, it was a fairly decent story with potential. Keep up the good work, read some adventure novels and do what they do, just don't copy the story. :)
If I were to give it a number review, it would be a: 7.3/10
~WKC

14-Sep-2007 23:52:56 - Last edited on 14-Sep-2007 23:53:18 by uqgbqyihvkl

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