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Hey everyone, I'm launching Chapter 1 of my fictional Runescape book in a couple of days and was hoping some of you could take a look at an advanced copy and give suggestions to improve it

Tinyurl link for convenience:
http://tinyurl.com/Raze-War-On-Gielinor-Chapter1

Google Docs link for safety:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/117IVBB8fws24fJtRVWww2EpiiobNLAvmLGqA-pEwZsw/edit?usp=sharing


If you're confused about anything in the story so far then please let me know, because that means it could use more work. @Lisaa_RS - Followed by @Runescape
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13-Jan-2017 19:59:23 - Last edited on 13-Jan-2017 20:00:07 by Lisaa

Looks good Lisaa, will read it when I find the time for it Ceecs - leader of Ceecs Clan

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14-Jan-2017 09:01:19

Lisaa said :
Hey everyone, I'm launching Chapter 1 of my fictional Runescape book in a couple of days and was hoping some of you could take a look at an advanced copy and give suggestions to improve it

Tinyurl link for convenience:
http://tinyurl.com/Raze-War-On-Gielinor-Chapter1

Google Docs link for safety:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/117IVBB8fws24fJtRVWww2EpiiobNLAvmLGqA-pEwZsw/edit?usp=sharing


If you're confused about anything in the story so far then please let me know, because that means it could use more work.

I shall give it a read hopefully tomorrow and let you know!

Ray

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