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6c91921auvd

6c91921auvd

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Hmm, ok then, now back to writing...
done for the night, not with the story though, shall finsih tommorow. As I was typing I think stuff got out of order, I would appreciate a check over to make sure its all in place.
~A Wise Old Owl~
Geo-

01-Oct-2007 04:29:21 - Last edited on 01-Oct-2007 05:01:06 by 6c91921auvd

xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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This scene depicts Aaron's thoughts and memories of the events that are about to take place, looking back 36 years later.
In this interlude, it'll give a little background info on the Legend of the Emerald Dragon. I'm saving the big giveaway for the very end, though.
This is also an attempt at a little poetry, to see how well I can write it.
EDIT: scene's complete. May sound random at first, but will make more sense as the Story progresses. Censor at end is unavoidable, but you can guess what it says.

04-Oct-2007 00:11:18 - Last edited on 04-Oct-2007 00:34:14 by xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Yea, I never was too great at Poetry. The vague descriptions are telling Aaron's feelings on how his life was completely destroyed (mentioned in preview).
I am definitely gonna rewrite it.

"The light that shatters the night."
"The hope when all seems lost."
"The rider on the hill."
These describe his role as a Dragon. Comparisons between Dragon and human describe his path as a human-turned-Dragon and the choice he will ultimately make; how he was torn between the two paths.

04-Oct-2007 02:09:11 - Last edited on 04-Oct-2007 02:18:53 by xxDkreignxx

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