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xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Yes, that's the kind of diversity I'm looking for. To be honest, though, it's not much to work with. History is good and his personality fits perfectly with it, but you didn't say Scale Color + eye color (hue), or most of the Format. Please don't take offense at this, I'm having a bad day and I never mean to sound rude.

You don't have to change, I'll fill in rest.

24-Sep-2007 00:09:57 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 00:12:03 by xxDkreignxx

Zfire0100

Zfire0100

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This is really good. Posts r alittle skimpy but you worked it out pretty well. Tho the whole, cutting off a setence in one post and then continuing it on the next, that's alittle akward.
But with all that aside this is very well-written. Yur detail is truely pwnage :D
I guess i'm alittle hype cuz I like dragon. Who am I kidding, I LUV dragons ^_^
Anyway keep it up. I'm thinkin about givinn a bio but b4 that I gotta add alittle more to my thread. I'll be bak to check on this one as soon as i'm done.

24-Sep-2007 00:34:39

xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Thx Zfire0100, I'm glad you like my Story.
Lol, there's actually only 2 points where I cut off a sentence: 1st Story Post and 2nd before the last Post.
I use Short-Post Format (which is unique to my Stories) cuz PSP characters max is only 511, not 2,000 like on a computer.

/`\Wielder of Dra'Kes'Nar/`\ ~Exploring the darkest corners of Gielinor~
/~=~ Infamous PSP Author of Runescape ~=~\

24-Sep-2007 00:45:43 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 00:57:34 by xxDkreignxx

Zfire0100

Zfire0100

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I don think I hav enough characters using the comp. I'd probably kill myself trying to post on a PSP lol.
Btw I did promise a Bio so here it is.
Name: PhrostByte (FrostBite)
Age: 75
Gender: Male
Type of Dragon (Wyvern, Dark, Light, Silver, Ruby, Sapphire, Water, Ice, Emerald): Ice
Fire Color: White and misty, like a snowstorm. (Frost Breath)
Icy and ocean blue with a pillar shape. (PhrozenFlame)
Hue (eyes, wings, chest, tail, body, claws, legs, head, etc.): Icy Blue slender peircing eyes. Large white webbed wings with icy blue veins. A dark slash mark on its large white chest. A long white with icy blue scales on its tail, which slims out to a point at the end. Dull-grey razor sharp talons on his hands. Large sturdy legs. A slim head with two sharp spikes sticking up like a crown and razor sharp spiked teeth.
Outstanding Bodily Features (Webbed feet, scars, etc: I think i discribed everything.
Things that make the Char. stand apart from other Dragons): A master of both soaring, and powered flight.

Personality: Dark. A killing machine. Shows no emotion towards anything. Once he descides on doing something, he is very determined on getting it accomplished, even if it means putting himself and others in danger.
History: Born near a volcano, he witnessed his mother being slaughtered by a fire dragon and harbors a burning hatred for them. He completely froze a volcano. He then wondered around the world aimlessly looking for a purpose, or atleast a worthy opponent.

24-Sep-2007 00:59:23 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 01:14:56 by Zfire0100

xxDkreignxx

xxDkreignxx

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Oh, really? Awesome! Unfortunately no, you can't Copy and Paste. Hmm... I thought there was something familiar about the short length of your Posts...
Zfire- I've been doing it for 3 months: you get used to limited characters. After a while, you'll get the hang of PSP Typing as well, though it's still pretty slow-going.

24-Sep-2007 01:02:49 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 01:11:46 by xxDkreignxx

6c91921auvd

6c91921auvd

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Bio Format:

Name: Kelandra (Kel for short)
Age: 20 (young for a dragon)
Gender: Female
Type of Dragon Amythes* (is that ok??) it like a lighter shade of purple
Fire Color: light blue- tipped with violet
Hue eyes, light violet, wings- think the lightest shade of purple imaginable on the wingtips fading into a darker hue towards the body, tail-once more darker shades of purple towards the body lighter at the tip.
Outstanding Bodily Features One, a wing scar running the length of the wing, Two, a missing claw on the right hind-paw.
Personality: Gentle and kind most of the time, but when something is unfair or danger bodes on the horizon, fierce warrior. Can be shy on meeting new people.
History: Kel left home at an early age, trying to escape her corrupt parents, on escape she lost the claw and received the wing scratch. She now looking for a place to fit in.
hope that helps.
Geo-

24-Sep-2007 01:10:10 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 01:35:29 by 6c91921auvd

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