Hi I'm Ruben Luc's brother, finally got to finish the story.
Ok so I don't agree with the guys loving guys, but I do agree that losing someone important in your live builds up sadness and anger. I think you portrayed very nicely what its like to make a choice and have to live with the consequences of that choice, and so it is important to think before making a choice. Other then that, very nice writing, good grammar, and very good description!
10-Feb-2011 19:33:46
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