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But I kind of miss constructive criticism these days
28-Jan-2011 02:13:00
Mmm, I hate to do it because it might seem rude, but I believe feedback and reread are both one word, so no hyphen needed. Like semicolon.
And sure, maybe both!
(Of course, there was also the 500 post mark release of my next thread.)
Whatever fits your timetable, mate.
And sure, maybe both!
(Of course, there was also the 500 post mark release of my next thread.)
Whatever fits your timetable, mate.
28-Jan-2011 15:21:24 - Last edited on 28-Jan-2011 15:23:24 by Englishkid62
That was... a very dark story.
By the way, on page 3 post ten, I do you mean "particularly" or "in particular" instead of "particular" in: "Nevertheless, it was delightful to uncover secrets, particular his brother’s secrets."
And on page 7 post 7 there's an out-of-place
face after "take care".
Who did Ronny mean when he said someone was waiting for Edward? Overall, it was a great story, and the character development was amazing, but the ending made me sad, and there were a few cliffhangers. It was definitely worth my time (and sacrificing my sure victory at chess) to read. Especially considering that English is not your first language, I was blown away. Thank you for the superb read.
~Kratos (aka Link)
By the way, on page 3 post ten, I do you mean "particularly" or "in particular" instead of "particular" in: "Nevertheless, it was delightful to uncover secrets, particular his brother’s secrets."
And on page 7 post 7 there's an out-of-place
face after "take care".
Who did Ronny mean when he said someone was waiting for Edward? Overall, it was a great story, and the character development was amazing, but the ending made me sad, and there were a few cliffhangers. It was definitely worth my time (and sacrificing my sure victory at chess) to read. Especially considering that English is not your first language, I was blown away. Thank you for the superb read.
~Kratos (aka Link)
01-Feb-2011 02:22:17 - Last edited on 01-Feb-2011 02:36:13 by KratosAURlON
Younger, there are more than just two of them
01-Feb-2011 03:23:23
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