Your story is fine Maia, you'll be a Maestro yourself in no time.
I believe everyone with a story to tell has the potential to get their story published, Dream, but to be honest, this didn't strike me as your soul story.
It was an exemplary piece of writing, but it was just that when it boils down to it. A soul story is something that makes you think, something that makes you wow, something that sends shivers down your spine when you read something so incredible it's almost magical.
A soul story is something you know EVERYTHING about. A scene can take shape within it, and become an obssession, you have to write it, to let others see it.
A character can be made, and suddenly that characetr is everything you can dream of to represent yourself, something you know is just you, and shines with the glory we all carry within us.
A soul story is the ultimate expression of writing talent, if I ever see a tale that immediately strikes me as a soul story, I'll let you know and you can compare it with the same person's normal tales.
'|~|'Taurus Drake Versant, Seventh Reincarnation of the Emerald of Fire'|~|'
<\^/>First-born of the EDOSTAR, Lord of the Draken<\^/>
06-Dec-2006 08:00:54
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