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great two chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

08-Jan-2009 17:27:03

Seph
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GAH!
My...Brain-GAH!!!

GGAAHHH!!!!! :O
* Meanwhile, in Wigwam's head*
Manager:Whats going on,what's with those sirens??!?!
Engineer 1:The brain,its overloading!
Manager:what do we do?!?
Engineer 2:WE have to go to the core of the brain and manually shut it down before it Implodes upon itself!
Manager:then lets go!
Engineer1:But heed my warning:all memories Wigwam has will come agianst us.
*and so the two engineers and the Manager go on a perilous journey,determined to shut down the core*
(Final Boss Battle Scene)
Manager:Engineer 1,you go shut down the core,engineer 2,you go make sure the zombies stay away from the doors so they dont get in,I'll hold off Alrous!
*the manager loses a cool swordfight between Alrous and the manager,and as Alrous Is about to finish off the manager,when a clicking sound is heard*

Alrous:What....no.....NNNNOOOOOO!!!!!!!

*Engineer 1 is dancing victoriously,as he has shut down the core.All of Wigwam's memories are turned to grains of sand and all blow away into the wind,and all is calm...*

*sounds of a computer starting*

Wigwam:*yawn*
Wigwam: What happened?
Wigwam:for some reason,I feel like an epic journey just took place in my head...I dunno,maybe it was a dream...

~w|gWaM126 "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

08-Jan-2009 21:09:40 - Last edited on 08-Jan-2009 21:11:57 by Seph

Ark Von Doom

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Though I didn't look into it extremely thoroughly, I did find this error:
"Everyone's eyes were widen and they were all in a state of shock and disbelief" should be eyes were widened
Wigwam you have zombies in your memories O_o
My story hit sort of a standstill; it's not writers block I'm just too busy playing Fallout 3 (which I got for christmas). In my story I just got to Mercutio's introduction and since by the time of my book he'd been crazy for quite a while he starts things off with killing people... alot of people :) :| O_o
Raphael Quotes:
Raphael: Are you sure this is where you felt the key?
Vexxazrin: I may be an Elder god but I'm not THAT senile. The key is around here somewhere...
Raphael: Maybe we should stop and ask for directions...
Vexxazrin: Aha! It's in that cave; I'm sure of it!
Raphael: Okay but if this one has bears in it to we're going home!
The cavern was dark and ominous, torches flared with a sickly green light, and the pathway was paved with bones. A pedestal, shining and untouched by the chaos that surrounded it was in the center of the room, and atop it lay a large shining key.
Raphael: Faust when did you get here? And why are you narrating all of this?
Faust: Sorry I was bored... I'll head back now.
Raphael: So this is the Key to Eternity.
Vexxazrin: Indeed.
Raphael: Well aren't we going to take it?
Vexxazrin: I'm afraid that's impossible, the key incinerates instantly those who have "selfish ambitions".
Raphael: Well then how do we take it!
Vexxazrin: Didn't really think things through that far...
Voice:...Through your will I was betrayed and can bear no longer the shackles of life. Gods here my warning, in death I shall hunt you to the ends of the earth and beyond; your lost sheep has become a wolf now...
Raphael: Who is that?
Vexxazrin: I sense great power outside. Well what are you waiting for lets go check it out!

09-Jan-2009 03:36:50 - Last edited on 09-Jan-2009 03:37:20 by Ark Von Doom

Serene End
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Serene End

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Nah..nah..not at all. You don't sound bossy, you're just helping me ;p

Thanks Wigwam, Ark, and Sis. ;)

P.S: Ark!? You have Fallout 3 O_O. I blew up Megaton; it was quite fun :P

EDIT: I just noticed that I need a mere 7 more posts until I hit 1,000 posts. :P
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09-Jan-2009 12:20:42 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:39:28 by Serene End

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You blew up Megaton!!!! How could you! At least you didn't help Roy Phillips... please tell me you didn't help Roy Phillips!?
P.S: Have you met Button Gwinnet yet? If not head to the bottom floor of the National Archives; he's worth it.
P.S.S: Roy Phillips is the Ghoul outside Tenpenny tower, hopefully you just shot him in the face the first time you saw him.
Raphael is under siege by Super Mutants at the moment and cannot evade fire and quote at the same time.

10-Jan-2009 01:45:28 - Last edited on 10-Jan-2009 01:50:43 by Ark Von Doom

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I blew up Megaton because I'm evil*****;:[)

And yeah, I helped Roy on my "Wanted" file. I didn't help him on my actually file. I liked the reward for helping Roy, Ghoul Mask for the win! :P Why? What's so bad about helping the poor ghoul :o . Was the reward a house or money or something?
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10-Jan-2009 12:33:26 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:40:44 by Serene End

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Chapter 13: Unlocking the Power Within
Stephanie sighs and takes off her emerald necklace and looks at it. Cameron looks at it as well, Stephanie moves her head to her left and looks at Cameron. He sees that she is looking at him and he looks back at her. "Cameron, I would like to ask you a question." Stephanie said. "What is it?" he asked. "How do you know about my mother?" Cameron closes his eyes, lets out a sigh, and looks at Stephanie.
"Well, it's a long story, you see. It started about 12 years before you were born. Tsura, your mother was about 16 and it was November 17th night. She was running from somebody, Megedagik was his name. He was a hunter, a killer, a murderer. Your mother's village was being attacked by this monster. Megedagik caught up with her and attacked her and left her wounded until I saw the flames burning that village and I saw him attacking your mother. I protected her by killing Megedagik." Stephanie looks straight at the window next to her bed and thinks about it.
"So, you're telling me that my mother was about to die until you saved her?" She looks back at Cameron with his head shaking up and down. "Go on."
"I hated Megedagik because I found out that he was the one who killed Catherine. He too was a vampire but don't think the only reason I protected your mother was because I wanted revenge. No, there was something else I couldn't figure out about your mother that day that made me want to save her. Right after I killed Megedagik..."
We go back to that time. 32 years ago. Cameron sheaths his rapier and kneels on the ground to extend his left hand out to Tsura. She smiles and grabs it, Cameron pulls her back onto her feet. When she is back onto her feet, she bows with her repeating the words "Thank you" to Cameron. She looks back at Cameron.
"Are you hurt?" Cameron asked.
"Mostly just cuts besides the one on my left leg of course." Tsura replied.
"Can you walk?"
The end
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the beginning...

10-Jan-2009 13:31:24 - Last edited on 11-Jan-2009 13:55:10 by Serene End

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