I'm on it!
"Is this...how..my victims feeling" bad grammar
"No..if I betray Lord Zamorak; he will surely kill me" unneccesary semicolon
"Suddenly, a pact of the Steel Undead" should be pack
"He looks back at the two and bows as he teleported away." should say looked and bowed
"Stephanie grins her teeth in anger" I'm pretty sure it should be grits
"He thrusts his rapier into it's" should be its no '
"Cameron has become enraging" should be enraged
"Their our comrades afterall" should be they're
There were actually pretty many this time
Raphael quotes:
Several Months later:
Faust: Subject 173A is still not responding to the synthesis, perhaps 456,000 volts is a little too much. Prisoners in block 3 were killed yesterday during a gas leak, and Subject 168D seems to have turned into a fish overnight. All in all a rather successful day, I'm positive that with further adjustments to the energy calibrater the next model will be able to sustain life. On a sad note one of the mittens mummy made for me seems to have had it's thumb eaten by moths, I'll have to buy some string and mend it...
Raphael: Working late again?
Faust: When you enjoy your job, it isn't work, simply more playtime. This task you've given me is quite a brainteaser though, I have to say I haven't had this much of a challenge in a long time.
Vexxazrin: It's only a matter of time before someone finds us here; curse those adventurers...
Raphael: I'm sure I can handle them master.
Vexxazrin: While I'm confident you could, there are simply to few of us to risk direct confrontation. Remember that you're still wanted dead. How much longer do you think you'll need Faust?
Faust: Well I've already figured out the mechanics, the only problem is attaching your essence to the wings.
Raphael: Soon we'll be able to come out of hiding. Saradomin will pay for what he did to me.
Vexxazrin: But first we must complete one last task. Raphael, I need you to fly us to Trollweis.
Raphael: Of course master.
"Is this...how..my victims feeling" bad grammar
"No..if I betray Lord Zamorak; he will surely kill me" unneccesary semicolon
"Suddenly, a pact of the Steel Undead" should be pack
"He looks back at the two and bows as he teleported away." should say looked and bowed
"Stephanie grins her teeth in anger" I'm pretty sure it should be grits
"He thrusts his rapier into it's" should be its no '
"Cameron has become enraging" should be enraged
"Their our comrades afterall" should be they're
There were actually pretty many this time
Raphael quotes:
Several Months later:
Faust: Subject 173A is still not responding to the synthesis, perhaps 456,000 volts is a little too much. Prisoners in block 3 were killed yesterday during a gas leak, and Subject 168D seems to have turned into a fish overnight. All in all a rather successful day, I'm positive that with further adjustments to the energy calibrater the next model will be able to sustain life. On a sad note one of the mittens mummy made for me seems to have had it's thumb eaten by moths, I'll have to buy some string and mend it...
Raphael: Working late again?
Faust: When you enjoy your job, it isn't work, simply more playtime. This task you've given me is quite a brainteaser though, I have to say I haven't had this much of a challenge in a long time.
Vexxazrin: It's only a matter of time before someone finds us here; curse those adventurers...
Raphael: I'm sure I can handle them master.
Vexxazrin: While I'm confident you could, there are simply to few of us to risk direct confrontation. Remember that you're still wanted dead. How much longer do you think you'll need Faust?
Faust: Well I've already figured out the mechanics, the only problem is attaching your essence to the wings.
Raphael: Soon we'll be able to come out of hiding. Saradomin will pay for what he did to me.
Vexxazrin: But first we must complete one last task. Raphael, I need you to fly us to Trollweis.
Raphael: Of course master.
07-Jan-2009 22:15:25 - Last edited on 08-Jan-2009 01:41:46 by Ark Von Doom
