If you helped Roy by unleashing the Feral Ghouls shame on you. If you helped him by convincing everyone he's a nice guy, then try visiting Tenpenny tower again. If everything looks fine then go upstairs and into Tenpenny's room to find him "missing" after a "disagreement" with Roy. Leave and come back again. Roy and his two goonies will now be alone in the tower; he killed and looted all the other residents and stuck them in the basement! Congratulations, you've now wiped out TWO cities worth of people and made almost all quests involving Tenpenny undoable.
And now time for the errors:
"Your mother's village was being attack by this monster" should be attacked.
"The other assassins around began to panic, a assassin scholar runs across Solomon and Spero and he yelled" should be "an assassin" and should be "and yells"
Earthquake is one word.
"with a overjoyed look on his face" should be "an overjoyed look"
"Since his life was lost. He became" unneccesary period.
"But, if he controls judgment. Why didn't he kill me?" unneccesary period
Raphael Quotes:
Mercutio prepares to stab himself in the heart.
Mercutio: Come death; have at thee!
Vexxazrin: Not just yet.
Mercutio: Who... who are you?
Vexxazrin: My name is unimportant. What is important is that you were about to waste a very valuable asset.
Mercutio: You're an angel... have you come for me?
Raphael: Err... Yes?
Mercutio: Then die!
Mercutio lunges at Raphael with the knife but is easily blocked.
Vexxazrin: Patience. I sense much turmoil in you knight. What is it you were saying just now?
Mercutio: It matters not, I could never kill the gods.
Vexxazrin: That is where you are wrong.
Raphael and Mercutio: Whaaat!?
Vexxazrin: Within this cave lies a great power, a power older than all that you know, a power... that could kill a god.
Mercutio: What is this power?
Vexxazrin: Come.
They enter the cave.
Vexxazrin: This is the Key to Eternity. It holds all the power you could ever need.
11-Jan-2009 03:03:24
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