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Anenemus

Anenemus

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"Now can you tell us who you are?"asked Zen.
"Not yet,let us take you somewhere safe."replied the Warrior.
The company walked towards a small house near a farm.They settled inside.The ranger closed the door as everyone settled down.
"Can you tell me now?"asked Zen.
"Of course,we three are dedicated against fighting evil forces and societies.You have been travelling with Dannie,the main magician of the Dagon'Hai,an evil society dedicated to Zamorak.She was trying to train you so that you would soon join the Dagon'hai."said the Ranger.
"Dannie?Evil?Was she the one who ordered that person to kill me?"asked Zen.
"Dannie had ordered the "opponent",Nate to kill you.She thought you are weak and she ordered Nate to dispose you."replied the Warrior.
"Okay.Thank you for saving me.May I know your names?"inquired Zen.
"Sure."said the Warrior."Im Valior,the ranger is Elisa and the mage is Hexa."
"Okay,in case you had any problems,take this."said Hexa as she handed Zen a large polished glass orb.
"Whats this?"asked Zen.
"This is an orb.We can contact you and you can contact us."said Valior.
"Thank you.I will be on my way."
"Farewell."said the three.

28-Apr-2011 11:57:34 - Last edited on 19-May-2011 06:15:06 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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Chapter 7:Vampire Slayer
From Falador,Zen set out to the east and headed to his native place,Draynor.He went past a place called "Port Sarim" and a small cabbage farm.On the way a Highwayman attacked him but he quickly fell to Zen's Adamant 2 Handed Sword.
Finally,Zen reached Draynor.He first headed for his dad's house.He knocked the door on the house.A few seconds later,Zen heard the familiar voice of his father:
"Come in!"
Zen stepped through the door and walked towards the Hallway.He saw his father sitting on a rocking chair,cutting an uncut dragonstone.
"Hullo Zen!How were your adventures?"asked Zen's Father.
"Pretty good,Father.I have a lot to tell you."replied Zen.
Zen then told his father about his adventures.He told about how Zen fought the goblins,met Dannie,killed a demon and fought an assassin.After speaking, Zen became silent.
There was a minute of silence.Then Zen's father laughed and spoke:
"Dear Lord Saradomin,you have become one powerful adventurer.I remember how you were a timid young lad and now you are a confident adventurer!"
Zen blushed and spoke."Father,I will stay here for the night and then I will depart again.Are there any 'jobs' for me to do here?"
"Of course,adventurers never have time to rest!Also,our neighbour Morgan had been talking about a Vampire haunting Draynor.Talk to him for more information."said Zen's father.
"Alright."
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After a day(and a night)of rest,Zen departed from his old home.He walked a few houses ahead and stopped at a very old looking house.He knocked on the door.A terrified voice squeaked out:
"C-Come in!"
Zen stepped into the house.He climbed up the stairs and found a terrified-looking man sitting on a chair.He had brown hair and brown eyes and wore blue robes.
"Oh,h-hullo Zen."squeaked Morgan.
"Hello Morgan!I heard of you talking a Vampire haunting Draynor."spoke Zen.
"Y-yes.I don't know h-how it can be k-killed please help us!"wailed Morgan.

28-Apr-2011 13:23:16 - Last edited on 29-Apr-2011 12:17:23 by Anenemus

Carsten 901

Carsten 901

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Great chapter finish :D (Also i love the way you are able to send out a chapter everybday :D )

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28-Apr-2011 15:07:43

Anenemus

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ty and yes,I have a lot of free time :) Lots of work from college but..err..yeah never mind.

Check it out regularly everyday.If I have any "problems",my chapter may be a bit late or may be posteed the next day.

29-Apr-2011 11:19:30 - Last edited on 29-Apr-2011 11:35:03 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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"Okay.Now do you know how I can kill this Vampire?Also,what's it's name?"asked Zen.
"A certain Doctor Harlow.H-he claims to be a retired Vampire Hunter.Y-you can find him in the Blue Moon Inn in the s-south of V-Varrock.The vampire's name is Count Draynor."stammered Zen.
"G-good luck!Don't die too!"shouted Morgan as Zen climbed down the stairs.
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"Buy me a drink pleash."
"I will but tell me Doctor Harlow,how can I kill a vampire?"demanded Zen.
"Buy me a drink pleash!"begged Doctor Harlow.
"All right.."said Zen.He walked to the bar and ordered a pint of beer.He payed the bartender 1 gp.
"Here you go.Now tell me,how can I slay Count Draynor, a Vampire haunting Draynor."
After drinking the beer,Dr Harlow replied in a more serious voice,"Aaah,Vampires.People always asked me how to kill them.I'll tell you as Morgan was a special friend."
"Take this take here-Harlow hands Zen a sharp wooden spike- and a hammer."Fight the Vampire like you would a normal creature and when it is nearing its doom,impale it with the stake.Apply garlic paste on your body so that it gets weakened."
"Thank you Dr.Harlow."
"Its my pleasure m'boy..."
(CONTINUED AT PAGE 5)

29-Apr-2011 12:07:22 - Last edited on 29-May-2011 09:52:21 by Anenemus

Carsten 901

Carsten 901

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Cool add :D

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29-Apr-2011 15:07:21

MrDuelist

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It is a very good story, but I suggest going back and fixing grammar mistakes that you may have missed. Also, normally a space is after commas, periods, and other stoppers, and you might want to look into that unless that is your style, which is alright too, but make sure you use it for an effect. My favorite part so far is when they mention the King Mods, that was funny :) .

01-May-2011 14:46:39

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