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Anenemus

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I'll keep that in mind.Any other comments?
Thanks for pointing out the mistake.However as I already continute my story without any spaces, I will continue to do that in my upcoming stories.

25-Apr-2011 12:40:47 - Last edited on 25-Apr-2011 12:44:33 by Anenemus

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You MUST do it in your other stories. As a writer, you are expected to improve and, no, I won't have any discussions about this. It's not that I have authority; it's just that I want your stories to have less flaws as much as possible.

25-Apr-2011 12:58:27

Anenemus

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After travelling through time,the people came back to the same spot.However,only their souls were transported so they could only talk with each others and not with the people of the past.The past figures of the two people were near a lever.
The guy in Dragon was talking to the victim who was wearing full Rune Armour with a GodSword Of Armadyl.The guy in Dragon was speaking:
"....hey you wanna fight the KBD?We can kill it and obtain its Golden Stash.Unless you are too chicken..."jeered the Dragon Man.
"I am not a chicken and I will come."responded the victim.
The souls then departe back to the future.
Nabanik then laughed and said:"You have been trying to scam us so that you can get "your items back".Let the great Mod Kings stop your activites."
Zen had heard of these Mod Kings.They were great people travelling from place to play stopping evil and tricksters.People believed they were the avatars of gods.
"Arggh!!So you have seen through my deceit.Oh well, you will never find me!"laughed the scamemr as he teleported using a teleport tablet.
The Dragon Man then spoke,"Let him be.The Mod Kings will take care of him."
The crowd then broke up.
"Ah,scammers and cheats these days.."sighed Nabanik."Anyways, what can I do for you two?"
"Hello Nabanik,My name is Dannie and my friend here is called Zen."spoke Dannie.
"Hullo.Now I'm afraid I must depart.I must explore these ruins..."murmured Nabanik as he set off deeper into the ruins.
"Now,I must meet a friend in the Wilderness.Please stay here and wait outsie the Edgeville Bank."said Dannie as she began to sprint towards the Wilderness.
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"So your friend is near the Edgeville Bank and you want me to kill him.The reward is 10,000 gold coins.Am I right?"asked Nate as Dannie summarized what she wanted Nate to do.
"Yes you are.I will wait for you hear.Once you are done, meet me here."replied Danie.
"Alright.Ah bribing...it is an Assassin's delight."

26-Apr-2011 12:10:38 - Last edited on 20-Jun-2011 08:04:09 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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Chapter 6:Showdown!
It was evening.Dannie had not returned yet.Zen began to worry.He had trained a lot in a nearby duneon on undead and hobgoblins and was now wielding full Adamant armour with an Adamant 2 Handed and an Adamant Longsword stashed in his inventory.He also trained a bit of fishing and cooking and he could now catch Tunas with a harpoon and he could even make strange bread which people called "Pizza."
Just then someone grabbed Zen from behind.He quickly turned around.He saw nothing.
"I could have sworn someone."mumbled Zen.Almost as if response to the statement,someone kicked him.But this time, Zen was prepared.He quickly sliced backwards with his Adamant longsword and hit something hard in the air.He felt his sword tear through clothing.After tearing through the airy "cloth" he finally saw his opponent.
The opponent was wearing a red,demonic mask and was wearing camouflage clothing which was green and brown.He wielded two Dragon Daggers.
"I see you have seen me at last.Now prepare to meet Zamorak and suffer his flames!"roared the assassin.
"Never!"shouted Zen in response.Their two weapons clashed;daggers and longsword.
Although the Daggers were small,they were extremely sharp.The opponent attempted to slice off Zen's head but Zen parried the attack with his KiteShield.Zen tried to sever the opponent's arm but failed.While Zen was moving around in heavy armour,the opponent was wearing a very light gear.It was easy for the assassin to evade Zen's attacks.
Swiftly, the assassin threw his dagger at Zen's leg.Although Zen was wearing Adamantine Platelegs,The Dragon Dagger struck deep into Zen's skin causing him to stagger down onto the ground.Zen was at the opponent's mercy.

26-Apr-2011 17:59:47 - Last edited on 19-May-2011 06:05:51 by Anenemus

Anenemus

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Zen tried to move but he felt a pang of pain at his knee.He couldn't move.The opponent sheathed out a large Dragon Two Handed Sword.
"Die well."whispered the opponent as he began to slice off Zen's Head.Before the blade hit it's target, an invisible force stopped the blade from hitting Zen.Then there was a huge blast in Edgeville as three people teleported in between the fight.One male and two females;one Warrior,an archer and a mage.
The warrior was dressed in the Armour of Verac and wielded a thin and slender rapier.He had deep,green eyes which sparkled from his helmet.
The archer was dressed in Black Dragonhide clothing.She carried a Bow and did not carry any arrows.Zen realized that he was seeing the rarest bow in Gielenor, a Zaryte Bow.
The Archer had long blonde hair and blue eyes.
The Mage was dressed in Full Mystic Robes.She had a staff with a purple cross at the top of it and wore Mystic Boots.She had black hair and blue eyes.
"You will not escape this time,Nate!"roared the Warrior as he charged at the opponent now known as Nate.
"Gah,foiled again!"spat Nate as he quickly took out runes and teleported somewhere else.
"T-Thanks for helping me.May I know who you all are?"stammered Zen.
"Of course.First let us get out of here."replied the Mage in a soothing voice.She casted a different spell and all of them teleported to a place which Zen identified as the South Gate of Falador.

27-Apr-2011 14:07:46 - Last edited on 19-May-2011 06:05:26 by Anenemus

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