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Englishkid62

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Thank you, Thranon. I still have your review, somewhere...

27-Mar-2010 18:51:11

I AM FRODO

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If that is all you can see in the story, I applaud you.
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It's one of those things that stand out. Sides, even if Kipplin was a girl, I'd still think of your story as funny in the end.

27-Mar-2010 20:05:49

The Level

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Then you're obviously not a deep person.

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27-Mar-2010 20:16:09

Englishkid62

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Frodo, if you find that a humourous ending, it is your opinion and I rest my case.

27-Mar-2010 21:59:12

Ladylurve

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The good:
I like the way the story was told.
Parable in essence, yet not typical and equipped with penetrating depth.
The not-so-good:
The style of writing was rather monotonous for me.
Overall: Worth a read. ^_^

28-Mar-2010 04:56:57

Englishkid62

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Hey, thanks for the feedback.
Would you care to elaborate on the monotonous style of writing?
Monotonous, implies unvaried, which I felt I had made quite a contrast with the narrator from the before and after the event (well, given the metafiction twist, but let's not go into post-modernism for now), so I am quite intrigued by your comment.
Out of interest, what kind of things do you normally read?

28-Mar-2010 15:15:16

[#R4EOGJ2FY]

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I just finished this, and I must say it's absolutely wonderful.
How cruel of David. I kind of wanted to jump into this world and punch him in the face.
I could truly feel the emotions of the characters, and I love what you've put into this story. It's quite possibly one of the best works (if not THE best) that I've read thus far.
It reminds me of Gilles' story, in that the theme was similar. I'm not sure if you know the story that I'm talking about.

28-Mar-2010 17:59:39

Englishkid62

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Hey, thank you for reading this and telling me

I'm glad you liked the story.
But how to make someone love you? It's not something that can be reasoned. So, in contrast with RuneScape, what you put in isn't what you get out.

28-Mar-2010 18:18:08

[#R4EOGJ2FY]

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But such disregard for the effort, and all that Alex had put forth... I wasn't looking for them to fall in love and live happily ever after. One shouldn't have to conform to someone simply because of admiration. Simple recognition would've been nice.
A question... Is this Alex the same one as the Alex in Quest for Love?

28-Mar-2010 18:23:42

Englishkid62

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Haha! That's for you to decide!

28-Mar-2010 18:26:46

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