Probably should keep an eye on this just in case. You know how people are, English. Lemme know if something goes down.
Anyway, you rewrote this? Interesting.
-- Chek
Hey, Chek! Thank you for checking in.
Yes, I did rewrite this because I wrote the last one two years ago and it seemed ... awful :p
How did that meeting go?
Has not yet happened. Probably going to over the next week because I'll take her out to dinner/do it. Fun shtufffff.
But I remember this. I'll have to take a look eventuallyyy.
-- Chek
Wow, bookmarked!
I absolutely love the starting (coz I've only read that so far)!
I'm hooked (up till now). Now I wish I had read this first before the "Love Story" you wrote.
I will return to read this in its entirety before posting comments (if any!).
Wow... truly stupendous. This is by far the most powerful piece of literature I have ever read on these forums. Frodo... you are far to dense to see anything past what you claim you did.
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Thank you for your kind words, Sira, much appreciated
Thank you for reading, and letting me know.
Hey, Lady! Thanks for dropping by! For a lot of old timers here on the forum, they would have read this before they saw the other one :p
But I hope you enjoy reading this anyway.
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After careful deliberation, I have come to the conclusion that I like th rewrite. At least it's comforting having a familiar story back on the forums. I will say what I have always said:
The deepness of this story is astounding. It truly gives you the blatant truth of our world on a platter, whether you want to see it or not.
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