Whisper-yelling is when you whisper, but realllly loudly. xD And you did get my heart juices pumping, haha. I think the ability to stir your readers' emotions says a lot about an author.
I wouldn't know, I haven't logged on in game for a little over a year. xD I just decided to see which of the threads I was on years ago were still here. Which, surprisingly enough leads me to how I found this story. I was on Elite's old story "In Bad Company," and he qfc'd his adopt a writer thread. I went there to look around, and decided to read a couple of the mentors' stories. I opened up maybe two or three, but only had enough time to finish this one, haha.
28-Jul-2010 21:57:33