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Allioss

Allioss

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Bob-It isn't on Saturday?! I thought that was the Saturday before the 6 Month Anniversary!! Hold on I'll check... Just checked iCalendar- It say the September 12th 2009 is on Saturday.
Runevivi- Yes, you can bring food. (I have a feeling someone called Bob Gilligand wants chocolate cake slices... ;) )

08-Jul-2009 02:20:44 - Last edited on 08-Jul-2009 02:23:13 by Allioss

Smok Taunter

Smok Taunter

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I thought I was walking into a prose story with the introduction. But it quickly changed over to a script story... Which I stopped at the first line from the "Level 3 Player".
Personally, I don't think "1337 Speak" has any place in dialouge. If it was written down it might be more funny but when it's used in place of a character's dialouge it's rather dumb. It was at that it seemed to devolve into a noob story with a twist. That being a cow as the main character.

08-Jul-2009 02:31:31

Allioss

Allioss

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I would like to say it is not a noob story with a twist. Noob stories are about not so smart noobs who are forced to be watched by a High-Leveled Player who in most cases hates the noob. In this case, the story is about a revenant cow with laser vision going on adventures with his friends. If you are going to comment on the story please read at least the first few chapters of Part 1.
When you stopped reading at 'Level 3 Player:' how did you know that the story would be bad? I myself think that Attack of the Revenant Cow improved as the story went on. Please read more of the story than comment again.

08-Jul-2009 02:59:41

Smok Taunter

Smok Taunter

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Well what I did read was actually pretty good. Although the apperance of leet kind of turned me off and forced me to want to comment on it. But it does share a few simularties with "noob stories". The story itself really opens up in Lumbrige which is known for being a city for noobs. The cow then goes about wrecking some kind of havoc about the town and killing the duke. Afterwards there's a surge of noob activity once "KingNoob" enters the story.

But as you said I haven't read enough. I felt commenting on the leet situation to be brought to attention. I'm not a fan of it really, I was raised by the grammar natzees that inhabitated this forum in the past that frowned upon 1337. Although, grammatically the first chapter is pretty sound.

Edit: Got through the first page. My oppinion of it being grammatically sound for a script story was kind of thrown out the window. You got some flaws of grammar in those early posts.

“Cow: I >except< your challenge.”
There goes the grammatical soundness.

“*Cow goes to the flag room and gets flag,then goes back to Saradomin Castle*”
He goes to the flag room, “and gets the flag, then goes** that’s how it’s supposed to go.

08-Jul-2009 03:04:20 - Last edited on 08-Jul-2009 03:15:53 by Smok Taunter

Bob Giligand

Bob Giligand

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who cares about minor grammarical errors? It's still a great story. the leet kind of bothers me too but hey I can put up with it if it means I can read a good story. Anyway, Allioss did you change the date of the party to September 12th? If you did Thanks and I'll try to show up. Still and 9am Central time? That would be 8am Eastern time Right?

08-Jul-2009 14:30:02

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