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NotFishing

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Azigarath said :
Presumably, the Black Hand is a criminal organisation and/or espionage syndicate of some kind or something, but yes, it would be nice to get more details about that, as well as if Annie is an elven Cambion or half-human half-elf. I must wait until Annie's response to clear-up those points for me.

I'm assuming half-demon, as that half-human bit was probably just a leftover from the bio being copy/pasted. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

28-Jan-2016 23:25:25

Azigarath

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I expected so, Annie seems to be rather careless. All you have to do is copy-paste my own half-page-long prompt somewhere and then fill-in the sections. But I did rework her bio as it should be, so hopefully it's good enough. But ya, if everything's alright, I await Annie's intro and see what I can do about it.

28-Jan-2016 23:30:21

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NotFishing said :
Also, you and me can make original characters if we need to, while Annie always seems to have trouble whenever she is told her traditional model won't work.

Lets face it, we all come under some degree of trouble when our characters come under scrutiny - we just don't see it much nowadays because nobody is so uptight as to actually deny people (because, lets face it, we're all kinda familiar names here).

I find it commendable that Annie has stuck by that character for so long, and hope that she is managing to create and is having fun developing the character she envisioned.



... THAT SAID, a half elf 10 year old spymaster girl is a bit far-fetched - especially if you don't intend to make her spymaster father an equally plot relevant and important character or expand upon her employers. In my opinion, the reason why you'd write a 10 year old into the story is to make small local problems seem way out of proportion. The average 10 year old is too young for any serious physical training, and definately too young to adventure on their own (EVEN ASH KETCHUM IS 11) , so all Annie would have going for her in the adult world is her size, the goodwill of others and her childish wits.
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28-Jan-2016 23:35:44 - Last edited on 28-Jan-2016 23:38:13 by Westenev

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I feel as though the Holy See is trying to manipulate the Inquisition into killing Fergus and Zephiran so that they (the Holy See) can take full credit for the discovery of the Grail. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

29-Jan-2016 00:07:30

Azigarath

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Well Capt, you can post Joric Ironfist as a full dwarf, keeping him a minor character, or a major character who has somehow became demonic, such as becoming possessed by a demon but in such a way he still has control of himself, or he somehow got demonic powers from somewhere.

The reason why major characters must be cambions is because only demons can truly kill the Archdemons; if an achdemon is killed by a non-demon, it becomes a wrathful spirit that tries to possess the killer, but a demon, even a cambion, can absorb the powerful demon and get some power from it. I was thinking that those who kill arch demons also get some of its powers.

I continued the RP, and attempted to merge all events accordingly.

Annie, you can copy-paste my reworking of your bio, and then fill-in or add what you'd like, if you wish. That would help clarify information and stuff.

As West said, a 10 year old girl who is a master spy is a bit far-fetched, but I suppose she could hide easily. I don't know if her demonic nature empowers her or not, so you may have to mention what gives her such mastery at such a young age.

29-Jan-2016 00:19:04 - Last edited on 29-Jan-2016 00:20:14 by Azigarath

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