Hmm...running into the forest to out run horses that have a squad of running squires that has an elf with them, lol I couldn't resist sending Lyna after that one
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Hey Lasky, should I wait to show Annie's powers after the chat with Azrael?
I don't think that was Laskys' main problem. I think he thought that you had scripted too many events into that one post, making it difficult for me or Azrael to catch up or write a response.
In my personal opinion, I think if Annie were to combust, it could be difficult to write Annie into the story if she were to become an apprentice right away - unless, of course, Annie is a strong willed magician who don't need no' trainin'. Doing so could also delay Edwards meeting, which I think Lasky (among others) are waiting for.
That isn't to say that I think Annie shouldn't burn the house down, I just think it's a big leap to have her immediately shipped off to an apprenticeship without reasoning or context.
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Westenev
The problem was that you immediately jumped ahead several steps and had a messenger at the wizard tower within three paragraphs. It was all incredibly rushed.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.