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Inferi

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Westenev said :
You have to admit though, the moment Kirito kicked his ass in the parking lot was the most satisfying moment in anime.

Agreed, I very much liked that.

My personal favorite moment was the grenade hug, though. Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.

30-Aug-2018 03:14:59

Westenev

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I did some minor edits to Annie's post - I mean, if you clean up the post, it kinda makes sense.

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Annie1227 said :
Annie watched the gun battle that was happening in front of her.

She was shocked that her shots on hit one of the enemy soldiers and only gave him minor injury.

She knew she needed to help the others. She also the enemy soldiers was not paying attention to her because they didn't look experienced. Annie was going to use this as an advantage. So, she decided to put her gun away and drew her dagger.

She ran up to and kicked the enemy soldier in the legs to trip him. Once he fell to her level, she stabbed him in the chest with her dagger. She then used mixed martial arts moves on the other soldiers in an attempt to trip and kill them.

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EDIT: Annie, don't be afraid to throw out one line paragraphs. Try to use only one "thought" or "process" per paragraph.
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30-Aug-2018 03:36:34 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2018 03:45:19 by Westenev

Inferi

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Making sense isn't exactly the issue. However, I'm just going to stay quiet right now with the exception of one thing that needs to be clarified.

Which one is she attacking? Which fight is she trying to get involved in?

And now I'm sleeping too. Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.

30-Aug-2018 03:47:34

Westenev

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The main fight is currently split into six parts, presumably with the soldiers scattering throughout the room. Therefore, it's unclear which of the soldiers Annie is trying to attack.

At the moment:

~ One of the soldiers was killed by your post.
~ One of the soldiers was killed by Issac, without assistance.

This means Annie could try attacking:

~ The Leader, who was last seen on the staircase.
~ The knocked over soldier, who was knocked over by Harry.
~ The Uninjured soldier, who is fighting the two barmaids and bartender.
~ The missing soldier, who is presumably charging one of Azi's characters.
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30-Aug-2018 04:15:07 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2018 04:17:38 by Westenev

NotFishing

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Westenev said :

~ The knocked over soldier, who was knocked over by Harry.


Oh no, he's definitely dead.

Or at the very least, he took a shotgun blast to the gut and lost his melee weapon. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

30-Aug-2018 05:09:14 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2018 05:10:10 by NotFishing

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