The problem with the Circle, Ferelden's in particular since it's not the case everywhere, is the isolation. You need to allow them to live normal lives, and despite what you're giving them there it's still a prison. Wanting to get out is entirely understandable, and it's really not giving the general mage enough credit for being a human being - or elvish being, whatever.
The idea in general is not bad, but I feel as though it's poorly executed for the most part.
Also post on my thread, West.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.
24-May-2018 00:36:07