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I just decided to post this script here from my story Crime of the Sentry What do you guys think?

*On the Road to Bandit Pass
*Another Bandit is walking his pet cheetah to Bandit Pass*
Mozzarella: Ehi! Welcome-a fellow Bandit. What's-a your name?
???: I'm Cheeto, and this is my stolen pet Cheetah, Chester
*Chester's stomach is growling* *Cheeto gives him raw beef*
*Chester is licking his lips*
*Gorgonzola is further up from the trailer
Gorgonzola: Mozzarella! You're a Supposed to be watching the road a
Mozzarella: I am-a!
Cheeto: What's going on here?
Gorgonzola: I don't trust-a him-a he could be a spy
Mozzarella: Are you-a spying on us?
Cheeto: no
Mozzarella: I need this in Oath. Do you swear to tell the cheese; the whole cheese and nothing but the cheese!
Cheeto: yes?
Mozzarella: Then welcome to the Brotherhood of Cheese!
Havarti: CHEEEEESE!
Mozzarella: CHEEEEEEEEEEEESE!
Gorgonzola: CHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!
*Chester is licking his lips and his stomach is growling*
Mozzarella: *nervous* uhm. That cheetah looks hungry... :(
Cheeto: *Chester is licking him* What Chester? He's been my best friend ever since we were kids.
Mozzarella: I'm not sure if he is kissing you, or tasting you.
Cheeto: He's kissing me, can't you tell
Mozzarella: I'm a going to get a cage-a for your cheetah
*Schmitty and Patrick come racing towards Bandit Pass and almost run Cheeto over*
Cheeto: Chester? No. No nipping* Chester is biting Ow! no Biting * Starts chewing through his hand. OWOWOWWOW!
Mozzarella returns 3 minutes later O
Mozzarella: Okay-a I'm a back Cheeto, where are you
*Cheeto is in Chester's stomach*
Cheeto: *Muffled voice* I'm not sure, It's dark and smelly and slimy in here!
Mozzarella: Oh dear gosh *Throws Barf Venison at Chester* Chester eats it and regurgitates Cheeto*
Cheeto: Oh Thank Guthix!
Cheeto: Why didn't you help me, guys?
Havarti: I'm not going anywhere near that thing!
Gorgonzola: Nice.... Cheetah! Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy! =)

29-Sep-2015 00:31:19 - Last edited on 29-Sep-2015 00:35:02 by Pink 4 Twink

NotFishing

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Alright, I'm bringing yet another idea to the table.

Medieval fantasy. No, ordinary people do not use magic. The heroes are part of a very old and prestigious order (yet to come up with a name - might just be something simple like The Slayers or The Hunters) that is dedicated to tracking down and killing demons, vampires, werewolves, witches, and other evil stuff. The order then goes on to face its greatest threat yet, which has the potential to not only bring down the entire organization but also doom humankind forever.

Should I make this a Roleplay or a Story? Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

29-Sep-2015 00:59:26

Venom1383

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Finally posted on KOK, hope I haven't held up the thread for too long.

NotFishing said :
Alright, I'm bringing yet another idea to the table.

Medieval fantasy. No, ordinary people do not use magic. The heroes are part of a very old and prestigious order (yet to come up with a name - might just be something simple like The Slayers or The Hunters) that is dedicated to tracking down and killing demons, vampires, werewolves, witches, and other evil stuff. The order then goes on to face its greatest threat yet, which has the potential to not only bring down the entire organization but also doom humankind forever.

Should I make this a Roleplay or a Story?

The no magic is a nice change from your usual fantasty thread. Sounds better for a roleplay, imo. Ramsay Bolton is the king we deserve.

29-Sep-2015 01:03:47

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Venom1383 said :
Finally posted on KOK, hope I haven't held up the thread for too long.

NotFishing said :
Alright, I'm bringing yet another idea to the table.

Medieval fantasy. No, ordinary people do not use magic. The heroes are part of a very old and prestigious order (yet to come up with a name - might just be something simple like The Slayers or The Hunters) that is dedicated to tracking down and killing demons, vampires, werewolves, witches, and other evil stuff. The order then goes on to face its greatest threat yet, which has the potential to not only bring down the entire organization but also doom humankind forever.

Should I make this a Roleplay or a Story?

The no magic is a nice change from your usual fantasty thread. Sounds better for a roleplay, imo.

My main concern is that the roleplay won't ever get finished. In the past two years only like four or five threads have ever reached their end.

Anyways, to talk more about The Slayers' abilities:

They are trained from a young age, at around twelve or thirteen. Everyone receives some degree of training in stealth, agility, archery, melee combat, tracking, and survival skills. As they get older they eventually end up specializing a bit more, but will still be expected to be at least somewhat decent at the above skills. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

29-Sep-2015 01:10:25

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Okay, I'm too tired to write my post for Ogre Wars. Do I post my responses to the other two story lines and post for Ogre Wars tomorrow, or release it all tomorrow as to be fair?


EDIT: I've been meaning to read Crime of the Sentry, I will certainly check it out tomorrow and get back to you Hags be hagglin', gods be god damn crazy, it's all happening ogre at Into The Fire

29-Sep-2015 01:24:17 - Last edited on 29-Sep-2015 01:25:41 by D F Angel

Venom1383

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Meh, release it tomorrow. Don't think it makes much of a difference.

@Lasky I think a lot of stories are left unfinished as well. You can probably walk away from a story pretty easily but a roleplay has a lot more incentive to try to conclude. Ramsay Bolton is the king we deserve.

29-Sep-2015 01:32:42 - Last edited on 29-Sep-2015 01:34:02 by Venom1383

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Venom1383 said :
@Lasky I think a lot of stories are left unfinished as well. You can probably walk away from a story pretty easily but a roleplay has a lot more incentive to try to conclude.

Thing is, if I don't finish the story it is entirely my fault. If I don't finish the roleplay it can often be because everyone else has given up on it. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

29-Sep-2015 01:43:53 - Last edited on 29-Sep-2015 01:44:10 by NotFishing

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