Emo, you've fixed a lot of problems in your bio, and I appreciate that, but you also introduced some new ones and didn't address some others.
1) Your population and military. I said your population and military didn't make much sense given the massive land you occupied (Siberia), but now you've taken a much smaller nation and multiplied it by ten. You now have too many people in one place and a military larger than Sorus's, which is supposed to be the largest on the continent. Your original numbers (100k soldiers, 520,000 people including slaves) would have been just fine for your new area, the Phillipines. Please revert it to that.
Just keep in mind that with your military consisting of 1/5th of your population, it will be very demanding on food and make mobilizing those dudes difficult.
2) The fog. You didn't take out the bit about it being created by alchemy. Also, between the reefs and the fog itself your nation's capital is basically invincible. I'm going to have to ask you to take the permanent fog out of the equation altogether, but I'll let you keep the reefs.
3) Your navy. 10,000 triremes is an unrealistically high number, even with your already high military and population. Even a dominant naval power like Sorus would only have a few hundred.
4. Please make a race bio for both the Teccans and the elves. You've given only vague ideas of their appearances when I also need to know their lifespans and abilities.
Fix these issues, and I will probably be able to accept you.
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Corbonyo, your second nation is accepted.
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I'd just like to take the time to encourage people to get involved in some activities other than the future war. Interact with your fellow nations outside the council if you wish. Share technology, develop trade, create your own events to bring your nations together or drive them apart.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
03-Sep-2015 05:57:54
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03-Sep-2015 06:28:53
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NotFishing
