Emo to be honest you should not put anything about other nations in your bio because its kinda meta-gaming or godmodding (Idk the correct term) Any past relations can be talked about here and other relations will be formed in rp.
Seeing as your last one was on an island the Goerak would not even know you exist, for that matter they don't know about any nation besides a few details of the half giants.
I'm by far not the best at RP but i have been around for awhile and if you want some help or advice on the nation i could talk in game, but as of now i think your out of the ball park for what cap is looking for.
This happens all the time to me. too much imagination and ideas tend to make me go at a pace so fast that it is hard to slow down. In fact I'm going so fast, that I can't slow down, and make assumptions about another's piece of work that are really unfair and uncalled for.
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03-Sep-2015 05:13:38
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Annie, unless what you're pointing out concerns you, please let the other person point it out themselves first. I know he did, I already saw it, and I already acknowledged it (somewhat) on here.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.
That can be a plus side to because you have all these ideas and you can bring stuff to the table that'll add to the rp.
I usually finish a bio in 15-20 minutes but i have it sitting open on my computer for several hours or even days. I'll write it all down then reread and come back to it a little and add on or change things until I feel really good about it. I'd recommend this but again I'm not the best so it might not help. Even rereading it once will make a big difference (for me)
Disclaimer- all of my tips, have worked for me but everyone is different so don't sue me I don't have money I swear